cool, not the longest but still cool, for a oneshot

wow that really made me cry...

Good. very emotional.

:)

bb13

simply fantastic

ya know, if I was a mushy kind of person, I'd be srying now. It's good, though, I mean it's unique! Sad yes, nut original!

it was ok. cudv been longer, cudve been more in depth but other than that it was good.

Peace,

Cat

Hm, that IS pretty sad. But I did like it. I hope you write more in the future.

YFWE

OH! That's a good story! The ONLY thing I would have changed was when she said that she would "quit being the huntsgirl." I don't see Rose referring to herself as the huntsgirl, but then again, I don't know. I scarsley watch the show, but from what I HAVE seen, I think that this would have been a great series ender should the series have flopped and they wanted to end it. As sad as this sounds, I really can see Disney using this story! I wish that you would keep up the good work for this series, as it might incline me to watch it more!

Oh wow, that is sad. i cried. but i still love it!

NO! glad that didnt happen in the real show... well we'll see how this goes...

Really! I thought that there were a few magical creatures there to observe the scene or was this just a dream?

i'm writing a story similar to this only it's longer. i love it.