Nice job! Never thoughted there was MireilleXReki...There is some words spelled wrong, but don't worry, the fic is still cute! XD

Hm. That was certainly interesting. Although it would have been nice to create some new places of your own, rather than reusing areas from the actual series.

A bit of grammar advice for you. Making a new paragraph every time a different person speaks is a commonly accepted rule. By doing so, your fic is less of an eyesore and a confusing mess to read.