cute story

Great story.

"You made me jealous of a girl!” lol

Nice work. The wedding should be interesting.

Interesting. I was thinking maybe it would be Diamond or Seyia or maybe even Sapphire.

It is getting good.

You called Haruka Amara but I thought you said you were not going to call her that. That is what she gets for trying to make his jealous.

Now only if he will tell her that.

lol Haruka is too funny.

The song worked this time. That is one of my favs from the series.

Still get distracted by the songs but nicely done.

The songs are a bit distracting but I liked the chapter.

Only nitpick is that if you used Japanese names for some of the characters you should have used them for all the characters.

Seems like this will be a good story. I will have to read more.

this was a really good story!! i really liked it a lot!

you did such agreat job on this, And I was thrilled to see a happy ending for this story!

you did such a great job!

and i thought that the idea of the ball, for the opening of the oprea was really a inventive idea and handled well! and I liked the opera/play you chose.

I thgouht it was so funny how you ended chapter 12 with him coming to the realization that she made him jelous over a girl! lol :)