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Reviews for: Not a Day Too Late
Yuu Kleiyu
2006-06-07 . chapter 1
I realy like your fic, please continue!I will be waiting ^^
shadowcat15
2006-04-17 . chapter 1
I like the idea of Haru and Yuki doing things a day later than they should. Cute fic, nicely done.
Reina-183
2006-04-08 . chapter 1
I love this story! You should really write a follow up.
Nalana
2006-03-07 . chapter 1
*giggle!* That was really cute! Very amusing, actually! ^.^ I enjoyed it!

2006-02-25 . chapter 1
Aww... sweet cynical Yuki. I won't whine if there's no follow-up, but I love this pairing and I like the way you wright Haru so I vote yes.
And, speaking of your writing, you're good, very concise but not too much so. But in three or four places you start to use expressions and then misuse words and kind of turn the expression irrelevant... like, "felt the eminent onslought of a headache coming on," for example. I'm assuming you meant "imminent" which makes "coming on" redundant. And, okay, that one I might just be wrong on and you did mean "eminent" but there were two others.
And now I'm coming off all nit-picky, but I loved this, truly.
Ink-Me-Up
2006-02-24 . chapter 1
Aw, that was absolutely adorable! well writtent too ^^ I love HaruxYuki so much so this made my day even better ^.^ oh, and please write an accompying White day fic! PLEASE? *puppy dog eyes*
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