|Reviews for The Moment We Kiss|
| Scarlett Rogue 1/24/10 . chapter 1
Ohmygod cutest pairing ever! I can't say much else besides i loved it, and you are an amazing writer!
| Darkened Dawn of Silence 7/24/09 . chapter 1
I squealed on the inside when Kalas called Lyude "Love". I would have externally, but it's past 1:30 in the morning and everyone is asleep. _"
This is definitely going on my favorites. Awesome work! _
| Renn 9/5/06 . chapter 1
Two words. Thank you...So much. That was perfect. Just perfect and I completely and utterly loved it to death!
| sensitive touchdown 8/23/06 . chapter 1
Ohh... So touching. I just love the way you wrote this whole thing. It was so beautiful. :)
| yuugata no baka 7/11/06 . chapter 1
Pretty good for a 'random idea' that came to you. I like it a lot. As for writting shounen ai, I started once and I've never looked back.
I'm loving this pairing more and more. Though, I think it would be a bit more one-sided, because Kalas isn't such the romantic type. Though I don't doubt Lyude's affection for the winged-warrior.
Well done. I loved the song too, it had a definate J-pop-lyrical-vibe. I loved the description, especially near the end of the fic, where Kalas' 'cool skin and tough muscles' is mentioned. That part sparked my love of shounen ai, as did the general description of Lyude's feelings throughout the story. Very cute.
| HappyCricketSmile 6/30/06 . chapter 1
Aww...this was so cute. I loved it! You write Kalas/Lyude very well, and it was in-character also. Good job!
| Ainahim Twilightbait 5/13/06 . chapter 1
Wow. This was really good. I've always wanted to read a Kalas/Lyude, and I wasn't disappointed! You put this together so very nicely and it was just so lovely!
| fire16zelda 5/7/06 . chapter 1
o.0 0.o o.0 0.o
I saw "Kalas/Lyude" and, with these exact words in mind, "Well, Lyude IS my favorite charater, and LYUDE IS HOT. AND KALAS IS HOT. So this must be good." I then read it. Yep. VERY HOT. But that's not the best thing about this story...I love how it was written! The pov it was in was very interesting, and gave a very...unique (that's NOT the word i am looking for...) ...AHA! it gave the story almost a hazy-otherworld-romance feel. :FBZ looks very proud at findign the words to describe it.: Yeah, so that really intruiged me. But, also, the context seemed like something he would honestly be thinking. Considering that, i'd say this was V. in-character! The descriptions were oh-so-lovely too! I was in awe with this beautiful masterpiece. It gave me chills. I also love how you made the plot twist so perfectly around the song. If you hadn't mentioned that it was a song...I would have been like, "OO! POET!" But, when finding it was a song, I was even more impressed that you could write a beautiful fic revolving around it.
I just rambled on for like 4 minutes.
As hard as I try...I can never manage to give such GREAT stories a short review.
So...in short (hahaha) THIS IS BEAUTIFUL. YOU SHOULD BE VERY PROUD. GOOD JOB!
And, with that,
| Inky the Bird 4/23/06 . chapter 1
Wow. That was great! I haven't been in this section for a while, and I was just browsing around for a good Lyude/Kalas story. And then I came across this! Way better than what I was looking for!
| The Shadowfox Mistress 4/3/06 . chapter 1
Wow. This is really good.
| The.Wingless.One 3/14/06 . chapter 1
\ o / That was so.. AWESOME! XD Aww, I love this pairing, but there isn't too many seriouse Baten Kaitos fans out there. Enough to write a fan fic anyways.. Good writting skills, great job anyways! XD Keep it up!
| 43501 3/5/06 . chapter 1
Beautiful. Simply beautiful.
Ah, Good old Kalas/Lyude. Wonderful couple. I lean more towards King Ladekahn/Lyude, but Kalas/Lyude is the second best thing!
Wonderfully written. I'm surprised you havent been flooded with reviews yet.. Everyone here loves Kalas/Lyude! (I know I do.)