|Reviews for The Becoming|
| Blutiger Tod 9/8/07 . chapter 1
My word, that was so wonderfully written! You took my breath away and elicited quite a many emotions from me. Ah, such good works come out of these challenges that people do. Wow, um, I can't really explain how this was... The way you would emphasize your words, your choice of words, and the parenthesis, plus the psychological and historical (for the characters) aspects...STUNNING! I really value a good piece of writing and do not lie to people to make them feel good, so please realize that this is a genuine response. I just may have to read some other things by you. Thank you for writing this for me (and others) to enjoy!
| Servant of SHEVAL 7/16/07 . chapter 1
Have I seriously not reviewed this jewel yet? I guess not...! I was going down the fanfic list, looking for Strifentines I haven't read yet (there aren't many), and though this title looked familiar to me, I decided to read it again and refresh my memory, and how good that I did! I loved it even more the second time, your use of words for description is amazing, I think I've added a few to my vocabulary... XD
| kai-kakashi 4/19/07 . chapter 1
woah nice i liked it the drama and everything it was good _ heh and in the end cloud go what he wantd in some way aww poor cloud and vincent there the same but so diffrent
| NO-ONE-IX 4/9/07 . chapter 1
I. Fucking. Love. You.
that was fantastic
| Soul Writer Of Dark Truth 1/30/07 . chapter 1
Wow. That was awesome.
| RancidxkilljoyxProwler 1/28/07 . chapter 1
I've read this 5,0 times! I just can't stop reading it! I love it!
| Lemisah 5/9/06 . chapter 1
Really, really well written. I enjoyed this a lot, though, if you want a little bit of critism: in the last few lines, there's a bit of a typo that ruins the end a bit. Cloud says, "I don't care about the goddamn plant," when it should, of course, be planet.
Other than that, superb job. Added it to my favorite stories.
| The Leprechaun 3/7/06 . chapter 1
You know, I liked this a lot. I think, while you said you won't be doing another Cloud x Vincent(which I really think you should!), you could maybe write more like this?
This is the first thing I've read by you, maybe you have other things like this.. I'm definitly going to take a look at the other fics you have. _
| Dvana 2/26/06 . chapter 1
who, intense. But very well-executed. It's hard for me to put myself in that sort of mindset, but you did a wonderful job.
And it's my fav pairing, but that seems secondary in the face of the strength of the story. Thanks.
| OmniStrife 2/25/06 . chapter 1
This is amazing. It makes me speechless. I love it. I can't say much more than that.
| Sorceress Fujin 2/25/06 . chapter 1
OO! Wonderful chapter! I hope that you will write more to this! :)