*crys* poor pyro, whys Magma vertually his perfect girl friend gotta be so mean on him T_T.

and as for his build he had a runners body not to buff not to thin

aww... poor Pyro. i've never really thought of him that way. to me he's always been one of those very misunderstood characters who just needs something more to give him a purpose in life, or something like that. i've not yet decided if i like it or not, but that's just my personal taste. i don't like seeing pyro get hurt at all. altho, by ur writing, he's not. anyway, it was well written, just not to my personal taste.

a wonderfully concise piece. didn't quite understand the last line tho. thanks for posting amyro fanfiction :)

i've read this... four or five times now, and it's still very good. excellent characterization of pyro!

Interesting story, definitely different. I like it.

this is good. keep going

Breathtaking in it's simplicity. What an intriguing couple. You're description of John was so very intune. I look forward to reading more from you.