|Reviews for Why|
| Nightmare on Stillwater 10/14/09 . chapter 1
*crys* poor pyro, whys Magma vertually his perfect girl friend gotta be so mean on him T_T.
and as for his build he had a runners body not to buff not to thin
| Snoball13 1/31/09 . chapter 1
aww... poor Pyro. i've never really thought of him that way. to me he's always been one of those very misunderstood characters who just needs something more to give him a purpose in life, or something like that. i've not yet decided if i like it or not, but that's just my personal taste. i don't like seeing pyro get hurt at all. altho, by ur writing, he's not. anyway, it was well written, just not to my personal taste.
| asp 11/26/06 . chapter 1
a wonderfully concise piece. didn't quite understand the last line tho. thanks for posting amyro fanfiction :)
| Lizard Pie 6/10/06 . chapter 1
i've read this... four or five times now, and it's still very good. excellent characterization of pyro!
| Black-Rose23 3/4/06 . chapter 1
Interesting story, definitely different. I like it.
| Scarlet Child 2/25/06 . chapter 1
this is good. keep going
| Andy and Kevin French 2/25/06 . chapter 1
Breathtaking in it's simplicity. What an intriguing couple. You're description of John was so very intune. I look forward to reading more from you.