I've enjoyed this little fic. I'm hoping you will add more to it once you get the time, maybe once the summer holls start or once you're settled in uni. (I think I can wait that long, we'll just have to see hehe)

That was beautiful.

-THe discription of the dress was magnificent. I could really picture everything happening.

-The way you ended it, I don't really agree with but it's a unique ending and I respect that you don't have enough time to make a longer story out of this. It's an excellent story though.

-KEEP WRITING!

-Ja,casui

cool. very good. clap clap clap.-

um.i think it would be better if you continued it by one or two chapters. that way, if others wanted to develop it by themselves on their own, they could have a sligtly narrowed down story to let their imagination run wild. if you stop it here,it would be way too generic as people would wonder what the ending would be like.

i think that this fic is fine as it is! in fact, i loved it!

Ah, that was an intriguing idea . I loved the description of the dress! I want XD. This was definately different, but it was awesome. It's too bad that it's a one shot. If you do continue, I'll read . I'm so curious now anyway, so many questions unanswered, like where were they, and what sort of Lord was Chrno?

good luck with that...

gasp that was cool! I was a little "euh" when i first read "Lord" Chrono but it works. all in all, it was yummy!