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princessebee 2008-01-09 ch 1,	abusehehehe! This is one of your best ones for sure. The action really builds up and that murder scene - unreal! So diabolical. Love the look into the workings of Arkham, just fabulous, and yes, we agree on many things here. Your fanfics read like an R rated episode of the series; the humour works so well and I love how Joker and Harley are depicted. The closet scene - priceless! I'm going to ruin all your clothes - hee! Ah. This is gorgeous.
Lost Child 2007-10-24 ch 5, anon.	abuse...Your version of the Joker was nothing like him. Seriously, I didn't see him in there at all. Perhaps you might want to consider tweaking some parts of your story. And also--it's really hard to envision the Joker actually taking enough interest in Harley to want to have sex with her. Besides, she wouldn't allow it without them getting married first. She may be a phsycho, but she's also a traditional girl in that sense.
Rumielf 2007-10-11 ch 3,	abuseis glad she wasn't drinking anything during this chapter "Why not have sex in a closet?" "Armadillo is a funny word." You are indeed the queen of dialogue. I bow and grovel in your presence.
Surreptitious Chi X 2007-09-26 ch 5,	abuseThat was brilliant.
GuesssWho 2007-07-29 ch 3,	abuseThat /is/ the kind of explanation they would use . . .
Tiera-Tarie 2007-07-17 ch 5,	abuseJ&H off to wreak more havoc. glad Joker's listening and allowing Leland to live.
Tiera-Tarie 2007-07-17 ch 3,	abuseJoker looked at the bleach still in his hand and then to the crowd. “Stand back or I’ll ruin all of your clothes.” He shook the bottle of cleanser menacingly. “Armadillo is a funny word.” "Rutabaga!" omglmfao i LAUGHED for a good minute. it really took off in the middle there. satisfying. loved it!
IckyEcchi 2007-07-11 ch 3,	abuseThe last few lines were hilarious. Why not have sex in a closet indeed?
Jenna 2007-06-20 ch 5, anon.	abuseHello, I just wanted to say that your style was freeflowing and fun to read and your story was a breath of fresh air from the beginning. Your incorporation of the rest of the gang at Arkham was well done, and the Scarecrow crack made me smile. You added a little depth to Joan and I applaud that. You made it interesting without watering everyone else down just so you can get to our two clowns. However, there are a couple things I wanted to point out: 1) Okay, Joker and Harley are anything but normal and their romance is going to reflect that, but I was hoping for something a little more than just the wham bam thank you Harls Joker I keep seeing in fanfics. Joker is a deep character and it would have been nice to see something like how he wraps her around his little finger WITHOUT dumbing Harley down. Look at Batman: Harley Quinn, she's funny (you got that, check), playful (check) and smart/unpredictable (N/A). You nailed everyone else but when it came to them, they were flat. I'm sorry, but I didn't see that here. I would suggest taking some pointers from Mistah Js girl and Killing Joke's Original Sin to make the characters interesting and not having to rush to the 'good part'. You feeling me?
alphabetsoup17 2007-06-15 ch 5,	abuseWonderful, it's nice to see interaction oustide of the everyday story for Joker and Harley, it was a refreshing idea to see them through someone else's eyes. Nicely done, thanx for posting.
Renna-chan 2007-01-10 ch 5,	abuseIt's brilliant, clever, and best of all funny. Fics like this remind me why Joker was always my favourite character. Well done!
WittyFae 2006-03-04 ch 5,	abuseBRAVO! That was an exceptional piece of writing. I can see it being put into comic format or even animated (for mature audiences of course). The characters were spot on, the comedic moments hit splendidly and never once did I think, 'oh, how predictable'. It was very compelling, especially your analysis of the patients from a doctor's point of view. And you didn't drag it out, it was exactly the length it need to be. The ending was also brilliant and tied everything together, I'm glad you added it. I'm new into reading up on Harley/Joker fics but I've been on this site for a long time and when I first started looking for something to read in that genre I expected the first thing I read to be awful, immature, pure porn or all three. Well, this was the first thing I read and it is clearly none of those things. I'm adding it to my favorites. I hope the others I find could be this well written, but i'm not sure i'll be that lucky. Keep up the amazing work.
2006-03-04 ch 5, anon.	abuseBrilliantly done! applauds I couldn't have asked for a better ending! I'm looking foward to your next piece! Thankyou soo much for writing this. It's.. the PERFECT Joker/Harley fic. I'm gonna try and draw you some fanart. hugs =) Here's my deviantart page. =)-- http://mitsuka.
Nightmare1 2006-03-03 ch 5,	abuseI like the epilogue better than the actual ending. -Nightmare1
Nightmare1 2006-03-03 ch 4,	abuseIt kind of is ironic how the Joker and Harley Quinn tend to be the happiest despite them being who they are. -Nightmare1

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