 xmich3ll3xh0x 9/1/11 . chapter 1This was the best fanfic I have ever read. The titles were so funny I was laughing so hard. Great job! *adds to favourites* |
 Happy Youkai 4/19/11 . chapter 1Hilarious! Every character was kept so true to their personalities from the game that this seems like it could have fit in the actual game. Great job!
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 Anna 8/9/10 . chapter 1 Hi :)
This is the first story I've ever reviewed. I just had to review this one, because I enjoyed it so much. :)
Well, first off, this is wonderful. I really felt like it could be an episode in the game. You captured Squall, Zell and Rinoa really well, I thought - particularly Squall. However, one line did jar a little: "We so aren't." I just thought it sounded too American somehow... I don't know what nationality I imagine Squall to be, actually... Or any of the characters, for that matter... Hmmm.
The last line was so funny. :D
And excellent titles. "Muffy the Vampire Layer" was my personal favourite. haha
There were a few grammar sticky bits, and if I were going to nitpick, I'd suggest cutting down a teeny bit on the adjectives, but that's just personal taste.
Anyway, REALLY funny and enjoyable. I laughed out loud several times. :) |
 Reddy-chan 1/13/10 . chapter 1Oh Hyne, Squall is so asexual... IMO, the Garden needs to add sex-ed into the curricullum.. Squall would definitely need those... |
 K 11/1/09 . chapter 1 That was hilarious. :D |
 Phantasmal Reverie 4/7/09 . chapter 1So darn hilarious! I was turning red from laughter myself!
Though it would be nice if we coulda found out about Squall watchng it or not hint hint ;] |
 Daleeria 1/30/09 . chapter 1ROFLMAO! OMG, that was freakin' great! -giggles hysterically- I'm, like, going to read this every day from now on, just because it makes my day so much better! |
 Dream-Silver-Haze 9/15/08 . chapter 1few weird words... that probably shouldn't have been there
but as for the entire piece all I can say is
hahahahhaha
that was good
thanks for making my day better! |
 cerespallas 5/5/08 . chapter 1ahahaha! I like it! The whole thing! You're so good at humor! |
 Relyob 3/25/08 . chapter 1It doesn't get any better than this. :)
Every word I loved. I laughed. It was just pure class. Please write more like this. ;D |
 no one need know 2/7/08 . chapter 1 Stop my ass is on fire? Well looks like someone knows their porno...
good stuff tho
really good stuff |
 GetDownMakeLove 1/20/08 . chapter 1Hahahahaha!
That totally cheered me up!
I was laughing so hard!
Brilliant D xx |
 LAMO 10/22/07 . chapter 1 Sex Trek: The Next Penetration LOL |
 Ree Ree 10/22/07 . chapter 1 LAMO that was SO FUNNY LOL I'd love to see a sequel |
 Pretz16 10/7/07 . chapter 1kakakhahaha!geez Zells' mom was way too cool,and for Squall yeah surrounded by idiots,..hehehe,..thank you for the writer,i love your story promise it makes me laugh,.. |