 fantasyinmymind 7/22/08 . chapter 11Oh please...tell me there is more. You can't leave it hanging like that. The only thing I would suggest is to put the flashbacks in italics...was a bit confusing to figure out it flashbacs to current time. |
 PersianPianist 7/11/08 . chapter 11wow I was never interested in Charlotte but this one hooked me, especially chapter 11 was just...incredible. |
 ThisPhoenix 5/21/07 . chapter 11WOo i'm in love with this story! will you update? please update it is really good! |
 andrea kamille 10/19/06 . chapter 11i LOVE it! |
 princessmai101 5/27/06 . chapter 11PLease Please update this story. i have to know what happens. |
 Shakayla 4/14/06 . chapter 11Great story. I got a little confused sometimes through it, but it was definitely worth hanging in there for! Thanks! |
 JamSack 3/26/06 . chapter 11 Hey, great story, and so sweet and lovely! I hope there is more to come! |
 kristina 3/22/06 . chapter 11 OHH..
I loved it!
I hope charlotte and Pierre got back together! |
 o.wise.one 3/3/06 . chapter 11 Erm, did you not know that Church of England priests can marry? That's why the Catholics hate us... |
 Monker 2/27/06 . chapter 11I really liked this story. It was the first Charlotte story I ever read.
I was wondering when the whole 'like a glove' thing would be coming into the story.
Ok...funiest thing happened while I was reading this. I looked at it and thought 'oh ok. its only three chapters. I'll read it then.' Cause I like the shorter stories (dont ask me why). so I read the first three chapters and then I relize that there is more to read so I think 'ok maybe I made a mistake, maybe its really four chapters.' so I continue reading. The same thing happens again and I think "since when were there six chapters?'
...long story short...there ended up being ELEVEN chapters being added AS I was reading them. Really weird...thats never happened to me before. I was shocked.
I really enjoyed this story. I feel like you captured the characters and their relationships VERY well. I'm afraid that I dont have any suggestions for you though (normally I'm the one asking for them...so I have none to give.)
I do hope that you continue it though.
If you are interested...I have done a bit of writing on here myself. Most of them are for MONK (the TV show) but I have writen two stories for Princess Diaries. I would apriciate a review from you (I'm not trying to make you feel guilty if you dont review. Just read it if you have time)
-Monker |
 RevSue 2/26/06 . chapter 11Well, since this is the last chapter of this story, all I can say is, THANK YOU FOR SAYING THERE WILL BE A SEQUEL!
I loved this story, and it was a great ending (if the reader isn't like me who wants to READ the happy endings, not just imagine them!) and I am so glad you wrote it!
Once again, thank you!
Susan |
 Zoeteproet 2/26/06 . chapter 11Wonderful, lovely story. Pierre seems to be the most sweet man in the world, although it's a pitty he went to the church.
Hope to read some more soon!
Love and succes,
Sarah xx |
 Poppinswannabe 2/26/06 . chapter 11Oh! Please tell me that you are not going to leave it at that? I need more! It is so good! Please update soon!
Nikki |
 princessmai101 2/26/06 . chapter 11 please update soon. i love this story. |
 aserene 2/26/06 . chapter 11WOW! i loved this! I do hope your considering a sequel if this is the ending! But please tell me its not! i can't wait for more! excellent job! |