hee hee the last part was funny!

Happy Yuki! i liked it!

Hy, i loved it
is so innocent, and so pure

"It’s painful being cared only as… a friend."
i know this feeling very well and i can imagine who happy he felt after this

the taste of paradise

i loved every part of it
without words to express who good was to reading this
kissus

This is the first time I read something you wrote and I'm already your fan. It's so sentimental! You have a gift. Not everyone has the ability to describe feelings and emotions this well. You must keep writing! ^^

it's so sweet! i love this story, even though i'm not much of a yuki/tohru fan, you made it so romantic and poetic. i'm a softie for poetry!

I loved it. Please write more! This is great so far. I need to know what happens. I need more to read. So, write more.

WHAT? THATS IT? OMG! Please do another part!! Please.. 8=(

Aww, how cute! I don't think the rating needs to be this high though; you can settle for T.

it was a good story. also very sweet. but i didn't understand much of the non- enslish stuff so i had to go back and forth. good idea on the little explanation on some of the words. that helped.

It ENDED!! NO!! I can't want the next chapter! I LOVE TohruxYuki stories (drools over Yuki,then snappes out of it) Hurry PLEASE!

^^ kya! Kawai!

Great story... ¬¬ a little short though... ^^

kawaii...honto ni subarashii...great work

er...
gostei mt!! :D

''Shigure smiling: Ah, so da ne(really)?

Yuki: Shine(die)!''

conheço bem esse ''shine!''... haha!
sempre digo... escreva mais vezes!! ficou mt bom...
esses fics de um capítulo somente são mt bons... nao morremos de curiosidade para saber o q acontece com a historia!! :DD

bjaoo!!

cute and funny.

aw that was cute ^^~
(those manga pages really inspired you, eh? I should've known!^_~) This time Yuki-kun got what he wanted ^^ His Tohru is very slow ahahahahahaha!
um... about the acute accent... you shouldn't use it in English ^o^;
but I liked! Yoshaa~! *thumbs up*