that was beyond creepy and disturbing. but i liked it. i must be cracked in the head :D

~cd

Wow. That was really emotional ;).

You made this just like a poem! All these soft, light words ~ "grainy", "mingling", "watching", "Hazel", "Noelle" ~ I'm not sure if you did it intentionally (thought you probably did) but it seems so soft, defiant ... vengeful, but moving. I honestly don't have the words to describe it, but it's beautiful in a demented sort of way.

I loved it ;D. And although I really can't ever imagine Artemis ever being so cruel, especially with his newfound sense of respect for living things, it's ... within character?

- June

disturbing in a very strange way. kept my attention though. and i have a very low attention span. i would have never thought of this, makes an interesting "threesome". Congrats on the awardish thingy.

I agree that you take ** up ness to a whole new level in this. =) That being said...

"Holly gestured for him to come down to her level so that she could give him a hug, but punched him instead.
Then hugged him anyway.
Artemis finally cried. And arranged to have the second camera installed."

That last line. That line just about kills me.

artemis is not a peeping tom! juliet is not a lesbian! oh my god that was sick and twisted!

A little disturbing, but interesting. I particularly liked the Posion ivy part with Arty and his sperm in a vial. *rotfl*

Wou, Artemis really is sick and twisted...Very Artemis :)

ok wow intersesting to say the least but good

hmm... very interesting. and twisted. but good. you make the pairing seem believable, anf that is like Artemis, to go after what he wants.

lol, they made love on his grave?! Talk about the ultimate insult thrown back into Arty's face!

Oh My God... That is the most twisted thing I have ever read in my life... I LOVE IT! XD

*giggle/snigger* that was great. really... not sure if I'm liking this word at the moment, but really... lovely. hehe. and twisted. a little. but not that twisted. ahem. well, if I could get more than about ten words in a sentence this would be more coherent... oh look, I just did... shame it didn't help... more!

How come your husband went EWURGH! and yet I just went "aw... *sniffle*"? Seriously. The world must be way off its axis.

This was amazing. So wonderfully Artemis, to do all of that. And it's just full of emotional moments that yank the heartstrings. The conciseness of it only adds impact.

Hurrah for 12LH getting people to write lovely femslash for me to read.

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--Kitty
PS: Do I actually even want to ask what you've written that's more disturbing than this?

freaky! but pretty cool, in an artsy sort of way.

Very Very Very Very nice! Good idea for pairing triangle also.

-Zoi, aka NaviTheInsane