|Reviews for Taking the Bait|
| Itsa Mia 8/16/06 . chapter 1
That was cute! I loved it!
| unuzed 8/12/06 . chapter 1
aw...that was cute! -
but from what I understood this was just a oneshot, yes?
HOW CAN YOU DO SUCH A CRUEL THINK?
this was just WAY too good to be a oneshot! you have to continue! :'(
don't force me to travel through time, space, reality and fantasy to jire battousai to kill you in your sleep!
You just gotta continue this!
| Second Storey Stairwell 7/19/06 . chapter 1
This is really good! I love it and think you should turn it into a series. Granted, I know that one-shots are just so much easier and a lot less stress, but think of your fans and the satisfaction you will get out of finishing a full storey. I am only thinking of the well being of you and your fans *flutters eyelashes innocently*.
| x-aiden-x 7/13/06 . chapter 1
that was so awsome!
| StandByForSushi 6/29/06 . chapter 1
heyy great story . but i was just thinking that maybe you could make more chapters to this, like kaoru meeting the rest of the friends and stuff. just a suggestion _ keep up the good work!
| Spark the light master 6/26/06 . chapter 1
I liked this stiry I was wondering if you could make it into a story Kaoru meeting the whole gang and stuff like that.
| seikkyokuka 6/25/06 . chapter 1
"‘Oh look!’ Her hormones perked up again. ‘There’s Battousai.’
‘Lovely…’ Kaoru replied absentmindedly still glancing at the two battling demons.
‘Battousai….’ Hormones drawled.
‘Where?’ Kaoru asked absentmindedly."
Even better third time round!
| Snow Dragon 6/14/06 . chapter 1
This was great. I think you need to make a sequal.
| enchantedsleeper 6/7/06 . chapter 1
I loved that so much! Kaoru and the insta-lust was hilarious XD I wish there were a continuation to the story! I'd love to see Kaoru meet Misao and all Kenshin's other forest friends!
| Neko-Lady 6/3/06 . chapter 1
Cool story! Have to check you out and see what else you have written. I hope they are as good!
| TheAlchemist'sDaughter 5/24/06 . chapter 1
I absolutely LOVE it! I wish there was more! more nights especially ;)
| Aimeno 5/15/06 . chapter 1
Aww just a one shot? TT Okay...It was very good _ I must say I was surprised as to why Battousai murdered people XD Seems very original. Awesome story line. Though I wished it was longer or you had continued it XD
| Sabaku no Ro-zu 5/12/06 . chapter 1
This was a really cute one-shot. Though I wish you would make more. I want to see what else these two can do. NOT SEXUALLY!
| Kenshin's Boo 5/7/06 . chapter 1
i liked it it was cute and i can soo imagine that for some reason
| Soniya Himoura 4/27/06 . chapter 1
i liked it. i t was also interesting and funny...lol ok bye