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| Twilight'sVenom 2006-04-01 ch 10, | abuseupdate soon |
| love-r-of-Jam 2006-03-28 ch 10, | abusethis is or was so great, and i really hope you write the sequel. i have to agree with you, i think all of the java junkie fans are so disappointed in luke, it's going to take a great deal for us to forgive him. great job! |
| Wendy 2006-03-28 ch 10, anon. | abuseVery interesting. I would have liked to see Anna come up to L/L on the dance floor. A little confrontation. I know what you mean about hating Luke these days. I hate the way ASP has written his character since the 4th season. I couldn't see him marrying Nicole, then with the self help books and tapes, that is so not Luke. Like luke needed a book to tell him he love Lor. They kinda made him a little wimpy. I think Lor was the one that needed the self help. Now all the crap with his kid he's being a jerk. Luke was always loving and caring and a good natured person. Now he's hurting the one person that he claims he has love for the last nine years. I think ASP needs to get her sh*t together. Liked your story, but it ended kinda abruptly. L/L should of had aleast a good argument about what happened. I'd like to see Lor just go off on him. Wendy |
| genevra 2006-03-27 ch 10, | abuseThat wasnt the last chapter, was it? How awful, if it was. You cant leave it like that. I am so angry at Luke. I understand he didnt want to do it in the first place BUT he did agree and it was so selfish of him. I mean, Lorelai kept going when Rory was upset. Sigh. I really hope you update soon!! And make Lorelai yell and scream, lol. Evie. xx |
| Insane and Logical 2006-03-27 ch 10, | abusethat was funny |
| Julia 2006-03-27 ch 10, anon. | abuseWhat a way to end this story! Cruel! ;-) Please continue! I love how this story goes and you are right, Luke is a real ** nowadays... |
| Nemi Jade 2006-03-27 ch 10, | abuseDamnit. But I guess that was bound to happen. |
| LorLukealways 2006-03-27 ch 10, | abuseokay, I'm intrigued is your spoiler alert about the real show or your story. what's luke going to get? What do you know? I'm a spoiler junkie email me pleaasee! update soon |
| chmelms 2006-03-26 ch 10, | abusePoor sad Lorelai. :( I'm loving this story though. Please update soon. |
| melako17 2006-03-26 ch 10, anon. | abuselove lorelai and luke, get rid of anna(his ex). rory and logan great. love it |
| LukeAndLorelaiAllways 2006-03-26 ch 10, | abusehurry up! update soon |
| Scary-Girly 2006-03-26 ch 10, | abuseditto!! UPDATE SOON!! |
| localizy 2006-03-26 ch 10, | abuseDude...seriously isnt Luke being an **! I mean seriously...i like your story and am looking forward to a sequel or an update where he gets his... |
| Lolabelle26 2006-03-26 ch 10, | abusethis ended? AWW MAN! i'll be looking for the follow-up! |
| orangesherbert7 2006-03-26 ch 10, | abusethats not the end of the story is it. ur story doesnt say complete on it so im assuming not. there can at least be one more chapter cant there. if not i cant wait for the sequel. i loved this chapter. it had such great emotions and i felt so sorry for lorelai. i loved it. if its not complete update soon please if it is then i hope the sequel comes soon. |