|Reviews for Live isn't a fairytale, Home isn't a place|
| ExtrmEagle 3/10/06 . chapter 8
Poor Marron getting sick but she deserves it after what she did. Glad she got better though. One question how does a capsule corp card work in the real world?
| Trunksreallover 3/10/06 . chapter 8
XD! Reading books about teddies and little doggies! *falls off cair in fit of laughter* Bwhahahahahaha! I loved that chap... apart from the whole Jess with Goten thing... that was kinda wrong! XD
well keep it up, I'll give ya feed back, all te feedback you need! YAY! ta ta!
| Trunksreallover 3/10/06 . chapter 7
Whoa... this is a little suss, JOKE! I love it, I can't help but love it, I'm a bit of a sicko, keep up the writing! WOOT WOOT
| Trunksreallover 3/10/06 . chapter 6
Oh dear god, the convos they have XD! Anywho, trunks is such a perve once again XD
well, another... imagenitve chapter and keep it up!
| Trunksreallover 3/10/06 . chapter 5
Marron came to see them! OMG! XD
-_- that damb thing still ain't letting me know when u update!
anywho, another great chap! *puts an arm in the air* TO THE NEXT CHAPTER
| Thomas Drovin 3/10/06 . chapter 8
Oh it was MARRON who drugged Jesse and Goten? I was going to say that is UNFORGIVABLE, but after reading about Marron's problem's of depression I'm willing to let it fly. Now I'm just wondering what caused her to be depressed in the first place.
It's a good thing Trunks is understanding about it too, still I can't believe he LET Marron do that. But he feels bad about it so it's alright.
I wonder what will happen next? Update again so we can find out.
P.S: Thanks for reading "Is this a Dream?" I have another good story to recommend it's called "A Twist of Fate" By Ella M. Nite
It's about a girl from this world mysteriously attacked and going to DBZ, meeting and falling in love with Goku JR! Enjoy!
| Thomas Drovin 3/9/06 . chapter 7
Woah! Who did THAT I wonder? If it was Goten he must be real desprate to drug Jesse like that! But if it was SOMEONE else, then Trunks might kill him and Jesse! That's IF he finds out! SO WHO WAS IT? Update again soon so I can find out.
If you don't you will get no more fine Blackadder insults!
| ExtrmEagle 3/8/06 . chapter 7
O evil cliffy. I think it might be Goten b/c Trunks and Marron seemed ok about it. Why is she dizzy though did she get drugged?
| Thomas Drovin 3/6/06 . chapter 6
Ha! Poor Trunks and Goten, not even Sayiens are safe from the dreaded makeover! Ellie is coming with them? Which DBZ guy can they find for her I wonder? I can't to find out!
You know if Blackadder heard those girls talking about their boyfriends he'd give them this advice:
Blackadder: "If you want to understand love, it's like a Christmas cracker. One massivily dissopointing bang and the novelity soon wears off!
HA! Update soon! Later!
| ExtrmEagle 3/6/06 . chapter 6
Good chapter. Hm Marron and Jesse kissing very nice. I can't believe Ellie is going with them. I wonder who she will hook up with. She seems to like Goten but hes taken. What happened to the evil thing. its been like 3 or 4 days and nothing happened whats up. Very funny about them screwing with Goten and Trunks, although they should have taken a picture for blackmail.
| Thomas Drovin 3/4/06 . chapter 5
Welcome back, thanks for the quick update! Yet another misunderstanding between our friends, thank god Jesse can justify herself in time! It's nice to see Marron again, maybe she can tell Jesse some of the problems between Goten and herself. Update again soon won't you? I want to see who the new enemy is!
By the way did you read that story I suggested yet? It's good isn't it?
And I never knew you were a Blackadder fan! I'm one myself you know! In fact here is a classic insult from Blackadder to Baldrick for you.
Blackadder: "Baldrick, you wouldn't see a suttle plan even if it painted itself purpule and danced naked on top of a harpscord, while singing 'suttle plans are here again!'"
| goliath184 3/4/06 . chapter 5
dont you just love those accidentally missunderstood moments. nope didn't think so. update soon.
| Trunksreallover 3/4/06 . chapter 3
:-O OH! Jesses was pregnant... I think I alreay knew that but I am shocked anyway! Cool Chapter! ... Don't really get the whole conept of the scars on her arms and stuff, but who am I to give out rash opions just cause I'm to thick to follow a plot! XD
*thinks* Oh dear... I really should update my story again!
U know, since I started reading through old fanfics and rating people have started up writing again! How much of a fluke is that! :D I mean, I used to be like the only new one at the top of the page and now I'm going down towards the bottom :'( I feel unloved!
Oh well, great work, and as I say every other time, keep it up!
| Trunksreallover 3/4/06 . chapter 2
*sings to the cat came back tune* BUT THE TRUNKS CAME BACK! HE COULDN'T STAY AWAY! HE CAME UP THE DRIVE WAY THE VERY NEXT DAY!... wait shouldn't it be year? Oh well! That doesn't ryphme does it! XD
Well, that's unexpected! He's back already! U really can't keep this boy down when he thinks Jess is in trouble can you? XD
By the way, I love it and u should be prowd!
| Trunksreallover 3/4/06 . chapter 1
trouble seems to follow this girl everywhere, but hey, she kicks butt!
Love the way ur writing this and don't worry, I'll be ur critic for the rest of the time u write these kinda TrunksOC fanfics, ;)
Well... GO TRUNKS GO TRUNKS GO GO GO TRUNKS!
wait... GO YOU, GO YOU, GO GO GO YOU! XD