aw i loved it ao much!

Nice story, but I found myself wondering what her history with William was. Why was she willing to meet him in the first place if she didn't like him. This is the first one of your stories I've read, so maybe Yumi and William have a history I don't know about.

TC

Besides the fact that William probably wouldn't go completely mental and try to rape Yumi [something that happens ALOT in the CL archives] your grammer was completely awesome.

Good job.

i loved it, yay Ulrich and Yumi!

Very nice! A piece of cake for you for multiple bashing william!

YAY YUMI ULRICH! BOO WILLIAM! thats kinda wierd to say, cuz thats what we call one of my "friends". okay, hes not really MY friend, but still, i hang out with him, so kinda wierd to say, oh well. BOO WILIAM! that time it wasn't wierd, i'll say it again. BOO WILLIAM!

-momogirl

aw

I love your page divider! _ great story by the way!

Great oneshot! i loved it! make another

Loved it! You should have made it longer and detailed and that William did do it all but then Ulrich came but labelled it an M. Ah well it was still super!

aw I love the ending! It was so cute! One of the best one shots I've ever read! I love it, and I also enjoy readinh your other stories, even if I forgot to review... but usually I'm pretty good with that! Again I'm gonna say, I love it!

one word to describe this...AWESOME!

it was interesting.

A good story, could have been better but it was great all the same.

I love it!