That was good, but sad. You write really well and even though I was confused at first, but the end it was all very clear. I don't think my confusion at the beginning was anything other than me being overly tired. So after reading that satisfying story I bid you good night. Thanx for writing! _

-IJedi

This is a good story. Pull it out for about 10 chapters, and it'll be a great story. Put some emphasis on the different personalities, and how they reflect the personalities of the original characters. Throw in a few wierd flashbacks/ dreams, and go into more detail on the types of pranks they pull, etc. Describe the characters more. Thia can be great if you put some more effort into it.