Reviews for Breathing Room

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Lance2401 2008-06-08 ch 5,	abuse--“Misato,” she gasped harshly. “he almost… we almost…” and then she completely lost it. She sobbed so hard I thought she’d bust a blood vessel or something. “Sh… It’s ok Asuka,” Misato cooed gently in her ear. “I’m here now,” she said as she stroked the young girl’s hair.-- Burn. Nice job keeping with tradition of screwing him over, lol. I like how she blames him as soon as someone else shows up. It's the same as her screaming "pervert!" but on a much larger scale, even though she initiated it. Asuka has changed, yes, she's become worse.
proud shipper 2006-12-18 ch 5,	abusei read this story awhile ago, but was so much of an idiot, i didn't review it! i then tried looking for it, which took awhile, but finally found it! yay! hehe. anyway, i really really like this story. the ending was interesting, and a little bit sudden, but it fit. you wrote shinji and asuka very well. i've also started reading the sequal. great job!
ERROR809 2006-11-27 ch 5,	abusephew u scared me with the this is the end of the story thing, glad u r writing a sequal!
Nitro 2006-10-10 ch 5, anon.	abuseThis has been the BEST Post TI fic I have ever read. You are truly an artist.
Gizmo 2006-09-21 ch 5, anon.	abuseWell, that was... different. Not bad, but different.
Necrokon 2006-08-19 ch 5,	abuseI just read your story and I'll say it was very tiring. I mean, you put way too much hardship in it. I just know that they could have been more understanding. Also, what kind of boy/man could ever be this naive. I mean you made Shinji to be a total dunce. That was not realistic. How could someone be so dense? That's just not possible. And another thing... what is up with the ending. You wanted someone to prove that it's a bad ending...fine. Here it goes. For one thing the story doesn't satisfy a person when he/she reads it. No one cares about any of the other characters coming from the LCL ocean. All we want to read is about the romance between Shinji and Asuka. How they love, understand, and support each other through the trials that the godforsaken Earth puts them through. It should not have ended like that. They were just about to start the new world and you had fuckin' Misato come out being all motherly, when she has fucked so many times. I mean that she's so tainted that she has no right to say anything to them. Another reason that she should keep her big mouth shut is that Shinji and Asuka have gone through so many ordeals that they should be considered adults. In fact, not even adults go through all the shit that those two have gone through. Also, and I think I speak for a lot of readers here, that the story should continue and show how they prepare for their child, and yes you have to describe how they had sex. You were already half-way through. You could just continue it the way you had started it. Nothing too graphical or specific. Then the chapters could go by months and have detailed accounts of what happens. Also, it never hurts to put a lot of waffy and romantic stuff in them. Then, after Shinji delivers the two children you could have people return. That way the children will have someone to continue the Ikari/Soryu family. Those are really good ideas. I really think that you should screw the ending with Misato and continue as said above. If you do it would turn out to be the best story ever.
CountJuhi 2006-07-23 ch 5,	abuseGreat story through and through i got to admit that i was a bit dissapointed with the ending and the abruptness of not having a lemon part >.< but the asuka part was pure originality and finest part of this story i enjoy this fic alot.
Story Weaver1 2006-07-20 ch 5,	abuseI don't like the ending. 'Everyone comes out of Instrumnetality'. It's like...I don't know. Like it's disapointing. Or maybe this end of the world thing was just so Shinji and Asuka could work through their differences. I liked the Truce part. Very original. The camp fire scene was emotionally intense, the longing and wistfullness of Asuka was well done. ROFL! Shinji's week of scarring was hilarious
world's worst ninja 2006-07-06 ch 3, anon.	abuseonce you start thinking, you realize that it would be very scary to be one of two people left in the world... i really enjoy this fic.
world's worst ninja 2006-07-06 ch 2, anon.	abusei thought the cities were destroyed when rei got all scary and huge and randomly decided to destroy the world... but we can all overlook that. this is a very funny fic. now that i have gotten over the death of the very independent fish, i can now mourn for shinji. OH SHINJI!
osilus 2006-07-03 ch 5,	abuseNot a bad ending, honestly I kind of liked it, as for the story in whole it was quite good your characters are exelent as are the situations and whatnot. Your a great writer, so good job and keep writing.
jcmoorehead 2006-07-02 ch 5,	abuseThat was really interesting, I enjoyed it. Ending was a bit sudden but it fitted in well. I liked the interaction between the two while they were living alone and trying to survive and also how they came to accept each other. Looking forward to reading the sequal now.
Sho Nuf 2006-06-29 ch 5,	abuseEh...the ending didn't do it for me. The fifth chapter on the whole, really. Asuka wanting kids like that seemed weird, and Misato's arrival just wasn't right. The epilogue ruined the tone and the theme for me. That said, I'm going to read the sequel now.
VASHATSOCOM 2006-06-28 ch 5,	abuseSorry that your favorite review is two days late. Im glad to see that you ended this fic very well. I did like the two very notable puns put in the story. The thrusting and naked day scenes were equally hillarious. I also think from intuiton that the parralel universes that asuka and shinji see were some of your favorite parts to write. Glad to see your making a sequel to it. I also liked how at the end people who ahd the deepest will to live were the ones who could make it out of the lcl. Anyways Im about to read eight day and dont neglect your eager fooly cooly freaks then enjoyment of a new chapter just because everyone and their mother has heard of evangelion. Stay cool C yeah thats right i used the nick name
xl midnight lx 2006-06-27 ch 5,	abusedude this is kick ass and all but its not that funny ...YOU MADE ME CRY YOU BASTARD BOYS ARENT SUPPOSED TO CRY. Sorry about that but this is reallt touching

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