Wow. Absolutely beautiful. The phrasing was perfect, the rhyming was perfect and the language was superb! I can find no faults. Thank you for sharing this wonderful piece of writing.

'Is he lord, or still a stranger,
To this City, to these halls,
Where the echo, Gondor needs no king
Still whispers in the walls?'

This was fantastic, and that last line really gets me!
Good work

I never read fanfiction poetry, but this was done perfectly. The rhythm and rhyme never faltered and did not comprimise the content in doing so. A very well written piece of work!

I don't often review slash; but this is well-written. And very sad; Faramir still comes in second here. And Aragorn can't even be kind to him after using him in Boromir's place.

I'll have to consider this very AU. But well-written and haunting.

Great poem! Though it had some nice lyrical moments, I must confess that my favorite lines were the raunchy "he confessed his place as steward, so to taste the sword of kings."

Unexpected treat - thanks.

This is a beautiful poem, though I'm not a big F/A fan. Amazing!