this fic is awsome! CONTINUE IT!

I love it! When will you be working on it more?

god, Keep going, I like the idea

Cool, keep going.

Returning the favour for you reviwing 'OTW'. P Likewise, I want you to update on this! Granted you havn't been so long between chapters as I have.

Still. I love the way you write the members of the Ginyu force, never again will I think of Jeice as meerly corny (which was my inital impression). So update!

Oh yeah...and have fun with Reffinest. Use her devious-ness to the full!

You have to update ASAP! This story is so good and it has so much potential. I love the characters, and the dialogue is fantastic. I can't wait to see what happens when Zarbon, Burter, Sakumei, and Jeice arrive on the slave-trading planet and begin their mission. I hope you write a new chapter for this fic soon. It's too good to neglect! Great work!

Absolutely love it so far! Don't want to waste time reviewing yet... I gotta read the next chapter! :-)

good story, but i really dont think you should have listed under Frieza cuz he aint exactly the main character, is he?

It's ok, but I haven't seen one person talk at all. It's really good and I'd like you to continue. Also when does Frieza come in, and talk! I know it's sudden but I just really want to see that cute little hunk of a lizard play a part in the story. He just so damn HOT!