This makes me smile, because I have guesses as to what's going to happen and they make me smile.


Thanks.

I know it's wrong, but I'm expecting Jareth to turn up in a mask with a cape and be all super-heroy. I dunno, it just amused me.
Onward!

Yay! Jareth is a hero!
Poor Sarah, though. That's just a bad day.

Nice take on the ending of the movie.
Onward I travel!

I just started to read this and I like it so far but I noticed that both chapter 1 and chapter 2 are the same and as I read the 3rd I see I missed the beach scene. Just wanted to know if there is somewhere else I can find that chapter.
Thank you

I'm happy that you finally created an epilogue. It was a little short, but it got to the point quite effectively. I'm satisfied if that is of any comfort.

I'm sorry to hear about your cat. When I lost my rat Guinevere died from a tumor I was far too depressed to write. I hope things get better. Later!

Very very interesting chapter.

I'm glad you added the epilogue. It really ended it on a good note. I'm sorry about you cat; I lost mine to cancer a couple years ago, so I know how ruff that is. They really are just little furry people, yeah? Anywho, great job on finishing up the fic.

I hope you post another...please...please.

Nice twist at the ending and a well written story. Congrats

Wow and wow and wow

I'm trying to be nice

I'm reading I'm reading. I've been up all night and should be sleeping but it's good I am reading

Review for the goblin king? Okay, Jareth could take me underground any time he wanted

Is that the end? I'm not complaining, but it does seem kind of unresolved. Do they marry? Does Moraga come back?

I loved the twist with Hoggle. Great idea! Moraga is twisted.