Aww... How sweet...
Damn gd how'd u do it!

AWESOME!

wow. this was so sad. but really really good. it was so well written. you did a really nice job writing it. i am team jacob but this made me feel a little more sympathy for poor little edward. good job. this was a five star just straight up awesome story. thanks :) keep up the good work

I loved this soo much !! I would love for you too write one about when he watched the tape, or during Renesme's birth or something else intense !! <3 !! LOVE IT LOVE IT LOVE IT !! Words dont describe it !! Keep up the good..heck..marvelous work !! :D

wow. The way you write is fantastic. That made me cry. It was so heartwrenching. I hope you keep writing, if you haven't already written one, you should write a story of your own. I'd love to read it.

that was really good!

your story was really good. well done?

i love it

very moving, well done

so nice seriously! I bet midnight sun will be SO similar to this! great job! SEE YA!

loved it ...nice done

excellent oneshot

Wow! I love it! Keep writing!
If you don't I'll hunt you down!

Brilliant. But, isn't fanfiction meant to be yours? Anyways, post more chapters on here. I want the whole story, okay? Cool.

That was mother beepen awsome, keep doing more.




TWILIGHT ROCKS OUT LOUD!

Heart,

Jenna