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| Queenofinsanity 2006-02-27 ch 1, | abusewow... I like it muchly... keep up the good work |
| DarthNexus9000 2006-02-26 ch 1, | abuseinteresting story...I don't get it, but it's interesting because it explains the Ithorians. |
| Dante-Raven 2006-02-26 ch 1, | abuseI don't know, I saw more of a theme of sleep and always striving to ensure the good of the many. All in all, I find this to be really good--and refreshing from a great many things. I am really glad you wrote this because it is a good take on the Ithorian. I had assumed that it would be DSE the moment he felt the sudden intake of the wound. |
| Trillian4210 2006-02-25 ch 1, | abuseInteresting. The breadth of your imagination continues to boggle my mind. (that's a good thing.) ;) What you have created out of few hints from the game was really excellent. It all made sense and while reading the word 'he' in reference to giving birth was strange, you managed to make it believable because you did not half-** it. You dove right in unflinchingly. I admire your willingness to tackle nearly any subject whole-heartedly. You don't flinch from those things that might make others uncomfortable or that are just plain strange. You put full energy and conviction behind your ideas and that is commendable. The birthing scene is a perfect example. It's not pretty or cute or sweet or sugar-coated. It's downright gross and bloody and stinky and therefore much more real. You didn't hold back on it, no matter how unusual the idea. And the creation of 'caremothers' and the like, only serve to make it seem more natural. I hope what I've said makes sense. In short, this was not really a pleasant read, but it was a good one. Cheers, Trillian |