Wow... such an amazing song! I made up a tune for it as I read it, and now have it stuck in my head.

very nice, i was singing alonng as i read and was surised too see how easy it is to make a tune for it

*shiver* You gave me goosebumps

oh my gosh! I loved this poem/song! it almost made me cry! It's very beautiful, i'd love to here it as a song with music and everything. Thanks for reviewing mine, by the way! it means a lot.

-BabyBlueAngel91

This song would be really good. I like this a lot. I'd never be able to write something like this. Do another one!

*applauds* Poetry to touch the soul, ne? I especially like how you develop the hurting, from

burning, and hurting, and twisting again...

to

burning and hurting, and twisting, and hurting

to

hurting and hurting and hurting and hurting.

GREAT job. *claps* *ponders whether to put on favs* *decides to put on favs* *runs away to go steal some ice cream* If these little asterisks don't show up...um...sorry?

This is a lot better than the stuff I've come up with!

That was a really good poem and it really suits the end of the book I think it's just perfect for the mood at the end of the book

*sighs* Beautiful. Brought tears to my eyes. Evil Stroud, I hate him so much!