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| Hiei-Riku-RubedoFAN 2007-05-07 ch 1, | abuseI'm not usually a fan of dark stories but this one has something. I can't place it but I really like it. I think its pretty good and it kinda made me think just a little bit. I liked it and it had something within it that made me think. |
| Sylvia Viridian 2006-12-07 ch 1, | abuse;_;...Kratos... This is really excellent work, some brilliant angst here. The ending is especially powerful, with the fading light...very well done. |
| Onihime 942 2006-10-29 ch 1, | abuseAngst makes my eyes burn as well. Not because they're bad, but because they're amazingly good. This one was no exception. I also know the perfect picture to go with this fic! If you type in "Kratos Aurion" in Google images, it'll be one of the first pics that show up. (I'm not good at describing things, so I can't really say what it looks like). This was a great dark-fic! ~I'm also waiting for you to update "Happily Ever After"! |
| meganekko 2006-04-08 ch 1, | abuseoh, nifty, very darkly super! And darkness is good... especially involving Kratos. And the bit about telling who it is is unnecessary, if people don't understand, they don't deserve to know! Ya, hahahahaha. Tales forever, monsterbookofmonsters |
| KrystalKrimsonStar 2006-02-27 ch 1, | abuseSORRY! I wanted to read this but I didn't listen to your warning WHY! TOO MUCH ANGST! IT HURTS MY EYES TO READ ANGST! ANYWAYS...I think that it was good for your first very darkfic. Um...for all of you angst lovers, this is AWESOME! For all of you angst haters (like me) this makes you apreciate angst. GOOD WORK! |
| Silvan Arrow 2006-02-26 ch 1, | abuseWhoa...that was really dark. And wow you write a lot of stories. I can barely keep up with working on one multi-chapter fic at a time, and you manage to keep three going while writing one-shots. Anyway, this was really well-written. I could really feel the angst; I almost got goosebumps! Keep up the good work! |
| Infinite Blue 2006-02-26 ch 1, | abuseI love the concept. However, I think you're being a little too vague. Adding on a little more detail would be even more emotionally jerking. (I.E. - possibly regarding elements from the story; like when he killed Anna, when he betrayed the group, when he was watching as Yggdrasill was about to kill his own son, etc.) |
| KivaEmber 2006-02-26 ch 1, | abuseWhoa. That was awesome. Really dark and angsty. |
| RoyalFanatic 2006-02-26 ch 1, | abuse...Holy...this was...fantastic... Regal: It is easy to see Kratos going insane. A very nice idea, and a great one-shot. Yes! I loved it! This joins my favs! *joins favs* Zelos: Wow! I'm impressed. So am I. Well, keep it up!^_^ |
| Tortured Hylian Soul 2006-02-25 ch 1, | abuseTHIS IS SO GOOD! :faves: VERY well written, and it captures Kratos perfectly! Keep writing! You are an awesome author! Now, because I've loved this so much, I will visit your profile page! ^-^ ^o^ That, ladies and gentlemen, is a keyboard version of an angel. |
| Kai Hiwatari 2006-02-25 ch 1, anon. | abuseoh that's so sad! *sniff* WAH! poor Kratos. *sniff* it was really well written. awesome job. =^_^= *gives pocky and pixie sticks* |