Ha, I liked how you got Rethiax, very clever. :)
Great job!

Aww, this was sweet. Sad and angsty. I liked it a lot. Keep writing, or at least I hope you do. ^_^

Wow! I loved the extra chapter, and the epilogue was just brilliant. I can't believe how much thought you put into ending the story...I loved the letter from Reeve, it summed things up very nicely. I kinda want to read more of Cloud's new life now, hehe. But then again, the ending was so good for this perhaps you should just leave it like this.
One thing I've noticed with your writing though, is you keep writing "since" as "sense".
But you're an excellent writer. Great job with this story. :)

I'm curious as to what AerithRosey said to make you take a break as well, hehe.
I found this pretty sad...but I'm glad that you had Cloud take something nice away from his time with Aerith. It kind of reminds me of when people die of cancer, which would just be an awful situation to be in.
I'm amazed you were able to end it so well in only three chapters, too! If it had of been me, I would have yapped on for like ten chapters, haha. Oh, I really like the chapter's name, "The end of Passion". This must have been kind of difficult for you to write as well, with the heavy theme involved.
Well anyway, keep up the good work! Keep writing, be well, and all that. :)

;-; ... that made me tear it was so bittersweet. Thank you so much for a great fic. And um... what do you mean I made you want to take a break from your work? 0_o... did I say something bad? :( I hope not, I absolutely loved this one, and I'm now curious as to what the epilogue will be like ^^

again, wonderful fic! Amazing job!

*Claps and cheers* I love this story! It's so sweet yet sad and the twist of Aerith with Geostigma made me gasp and left me open-mouthed D: I was so into it! *sniff* please update soon ^_^

As for the Aerith death scene line was this :
"I was afraid you would no longer laugh, cry…or get angry…"

The Original line was Cloud's and this is what he said:
(To Sephiroth)
"Shut up!"
"The cycle of nature and your stupid plan don't mean a thing!"
(Turns slowly to Aerith)
"Aerith ...is gone"
(pulls her closer to him and *apparently* cries over her body)
Aerith will no longer laugh, cry... or get angry..."
"What about US... what are WE suppossed to do?!"
(He gently puts her down)
"What about MY pain... my fingers are tingling... my mout is dry... my eyes are burning!"

... that's all I remember right now ^^;

Great amazing fic :) please oh please update soon ^_^

Ah no i thought Aeris dying was bad but now he has to watch it again and the fact he would have had her for a bit makes it so sad. Poor Cloud :(
Oh and im just guessing the line do you just want the first bit or not? Meh ill give you the first and if you want the rest then o well.
ahem*puts on Cloud-type voice*: "Shut up the cycle of nature and your stupid plan dont mean a thing! Aeris is gone! She'll never laugh or cry or get angry"
um i think it was something like that and if that happens to be correct then i have no idea what to suggest for your story lol

Hehe, maybe Cloud bawls once every day, for fifteen minutes before he goes to sleep? That would explain how he can remain so cool and collected for the rest of the time! :p
I know the line in chapter 1 that relates to Aerith's death scene. I remember feeling so sad when Cloud said it-like, he's just realising that Aerith is gone for good, and so is the person playing the game, so it was actually a very strong statement for me to hear. I won't give it away, though! :p
(The person who gets it suggests: "Lol, have Cloud do it with Tifa, and make Aerith walk in on them rofl!"
Neko:"...") Haha, that would be awful.
Geostigma. Now, I know that's in Advent Children, without having seen it. Cool name for a disease...even if it is life-threatening. Also noticed you worked in an actual song from the real world, hehe.
Running out of room, but you know I like this. Good chemistry between Cloud and Aerith. Your writing's evolving with each new chapter/story.

Mwahaha, it is I, Tollgateflamer! Prepare to feel the hot burns of my distate for the chapter, and cringe as I take it out on you!
...or not. :p Hehe. Kidding, of course. I haven't actually seen Advent Children yet, but I wasn't feeling confused or anything when I read this, so that's good. I thought it was a sweet start to a story, yet at the same time it has an omnious feel to it. The only "bad" thing I wanna mention, and it's not even about the current chapter, but just a thought is: the story kind of seems like it's going towards an ending where Cloud loses Aerith *again*, but Ifalna shows Cloud that if Sephiroth hadn't killed her, she would have been with Cloud briefly, until dying of some horrible disease/getting killed or something. :0
I wouldn't mind this if it had a point to it, but if it's only going to make Cloud bawl and feel awful, it might suck :p
Jeez, longest review ever, sorry about that! Bottom line is, I really like the story, keep it up! :)