 Zuzanny 2009-09-05 . chapter 1so sad... |
 jenny 2007-06-06 . chapter 1 I love your fics, they are really attractive and sad. The feeling they have towards each other, just so touching and nothing could ever change that.
Please, please write more, thanks~ |
 missterss elis 2007-06-05 . chapter 1i love your story |
 jenny 2007-02-23 . chapter 1 I loved it! Really a touching nice fic, everything happened in dream yet in reality as well... so sad, so painful, and moving.
Please write more! |
 Rei Asakura 2006-05-31 . chapter 1 I'm too lazy to sign in, as nearly always, but I wanted to thank you for reviewing 'Matsuri' and reciprocate the review. So here I am! I loved 'Red', it was evocative and gave a clear picture of both Subaru and Seishirou. :) I recommend dragging a beta out of the tangles of the Internet, though, 'cause you have a very small but distracting amount of grammatical and spelling mistakes (at least they're distracting to a nutcase like me). And sometimes I think being a teensy bit more subtle might help bring home your point.
Hope I don't come off as condescending, it's just I think your writing could be practically perfect with just these small changes. I'd be happy to beta a piece or two (I read Gravi too, so no worries), just email me.
Okay. I'm through being long-winded and nosy!
-Rei |
 EarnestInBerlin 2006-02-27 . chapter 1Man this rocks! You really captured the moment... I mean, I actually thought you were writing a fanfic about Seishirou ACTUALLY dying. You know another version of his death.
Man, I really hated the way he died in X/19.
This is so col... I really found the pen description about his amusing.
This is going in my fave stories. |
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