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Zuzanny
2009-09-05 . chapter 1
so sad...
jenny
2007-06-06 . chapter 1
I love your fics, they are really attractive and sad. The feeling they have towards each other, just so touching and nothing could ever change that.

Please, please write more, thanks~
missterss elis
2007-06-05 . chapter 1
i love your story
jenny
2007-02-23 . chapter 1
I loved it! Really a touching nice fic, everything happened in dream yet in reality as well... so sad, so painful, and moving.

Please write more!
Rei Asakura
2006-05-31 . chapter 1
I'm too lazy to sign in, as nearly always, but I wanted to thank you for reviewing 'Matsuri' and reciprocate the review. So here I am! I loved 'Red', it was evocative and gave a clear picture of both Subaru and Seishirou. :) I recommend dragging a beta out of the tangles of the Internet, though, 'cause you have a very small but distracting amount of grammatical and spelling mistakes (at least they're distracting to a nutcase like me). And sometimes I think being a teensy bit more subtle might help bring home your point.

Hope I don't come off as condescending, it's just I think your writing could be practically perfect with just these small changes. I'd be happy to beta a piece or two (I read Gravi too, so no worries), just email me.

Okay. I'm through being long-winded and nosy!

-Rei
EarnestInBerlin
2006-02-27 . chapter 1
Man this rocks! You really captured the moment... I mean, I actually thought you were writing a fanfic about Seishirou ACTUALLY dying. You know another version of his death.

Man, I really hated the way he died in X/19.

This is so col... I really found the pen description about his amusing.

This is going in my fave stories.
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