So I read this whole thing in one sitting.

It is so AMAZING. It's the perfect combination of action/adventure and romance between Nel and Clair. Those two were obviously together from the start, and this story really makes the events between them believable. Wow.

great fic

Flat out a very well done and good read. Very few errors, and everything felt as real as deserved. Period. I'm done.

The best fic Nel/Clair I have ever read! Amazing!

Another great chapter, Nel has always been my fav charater in star ocean.

Another great chapter, good job!

Finally a nel/clair story, in star ocean 3 i've always thought that those 2 are too intimate for mere friends.

This is the best fic i've read in a while. Recently i've read some fics that were... disturbing, would be a nice way to put it. This one kinda renewed my faith.

Gez, I read the beginning of this chapter a long time ago and it's stayed with me. I'm FINALLY getting around to reading all of it. Such long chapters... this might take me a while!

But I love this fic so much... it's one of those that I just can't forget! Thank you!

This had to be one of the best stories I have ever read. I love NelxClair, I didn't think anyone else did. I loved the ending, it was so cute and sweet. too bad the story ended.

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This is really fantastic. XD

Wow! A sweet Nel and Clair romance story! This was really beautiful, I'm not sure if I'm happy you updated it, or sad that it's over.

Not enough people review this fic... Well, not a lot review mine either ;) I like this... Its very skilled. You have talent. Im not good enough to write clair, but she is Nels girlfriend in my fic 'Holiday', congrats on everyone being very IC.

Woo! Now that's what I call an action-filled chapter!

O.O I'm in suspence here; /waits for more chapters/

Yes very good I wish for you to continue NelxClair gets far to little love with how strong the subtext is in the game

Ah, I should be thanking YOU for writing - not the other way around. I loved the conversation between Adray and Nel - not a good start to the future-in-law relationship... Nel's barely suppressed rage at Adray's comments; Adray struggling between what he wants for his daughter, and what his daughter might want for himself - awesome. Anxiously awaiting the next installment to see what will happen to Aquaria ...