aw... it was so worth my teeth rotting out! Really cute story... I loved it! *cries into a pillow* now if only it would REALLY happen...

great job!

Excellent! Really well written. I can't think of anything constructive to say. I enjoyed it immensely and look forward to reading more of your work.

very sweet story :)good job;)

Fluff is good, ain't nothin' wrong with fluff, especially when done this well! Quiet, understated, unique perspective -- great job!

Aw. You were right. Sweet enough to cause a tooth ache. The mental picture of Grissom with a baby made my heart melt.

You said it was fluff - you did not mention it was 'you will so need a hankie' fluff!

Great job!