please finish your story.

u could do one about how they met


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Why is this story so cute? And why aren't there any boys that are actually like him? It's mean to make us think there is! Lol.
^ _ ^ Aww... it's too cute... too nice...

I am drowning in a puddle of mushy sap. Some people have differnet views on that kinda fluff, but I'm torn between being sickened and impressed.

Aw every time I read a new one of these, I get even more jealous of this lucky Jill (yes even if she is a made up character). i only wish I could find an amazing boy like this.

AAWWE! jill and kia sound soo cute together. u should do a chapter on when jill goes 2 visit kia at his house and its a total disaster but he makes it up 2 her later by porposing or something mushy like that

Aw, that was cute. Funny and cute.

A theme. Um...how about...

"Full Moon"?

(Guess what I've been reading.)

Aw that's so cute. Very different from your other ones, but the variety is nice.

I could've swore I left this a review before...oh well. I'll just leave one now! YAY ^ _ ^!

Aw... This ff is so cute... I like it. It's short and sweet :)

Oh, your stories are so lovely! I’ll definitely put this on Story Alert. I mean, I guess you ARE continuing, right? ^^

Aw thats so cute. Im so much like Kai in the sense of his humming all the time. And that whole thing about the gods pulling him from the ship, that was so funni I got a good laugh out of it. Great job!

Oh man these are so sickeningly sweet. You are an excellent writer though. I am a big fan of these short stories within a story kinda thing. Know what I mean? Keep up the good work :)

these were really good Lightning-Dono! I really liked Angel, the last one. I was really sweet. good job and keep up the good work!

wow!...i like it:]

I realli love these, they are so cute! They are like prime examples of a wonderful relationship that like every girl would die to have. adorable.