 loveiaoy 3/18/12 . chapter 5Oh come on no pairings at all? _
If you really can't can you make a sasunaru version wherein orochimaru is the father of naruto if you're not busy or something
it will be greatly appreciated pm me if you'll do it thanks
if not it's fine too, just pretty please finish this story :) |
 awesomenaruto 2/28/12 . chapter 5If you plan on continuing this story and still need a beta, i could beta it for you. |
 lilanimefan247 2/23/12 . chapter 5great job |
 jazmyn 2/21/12 . chapter 5this is really good! |
 Lyndsey 1/29/12 . chapter 5UPDATE! PLZ! |
 yukinari 1/17/12 . chapter 1please update. |
 Alecksander92 12/24/11 . chapter 1I can visibly see changes from the edited version you sent me and I can tell that you have had great improvements as a writer. The story is still as interesting as I thought it would be and knowing that you want to put in the effort to improve it makes me feel ecstatic about helping. :)Happy Yuletide. |
 Reeses and Gaara 12/24/11 . chapter 5Damn! I want Orochimaru to be my daddy... X] |
 Maltrazz 12/8/11 . chapter 5Great story! I love stories where Naruto is related to Orochimaru! I am also glad to see a story where Orochimaru is NOT a joke.
Looking forward to more,
Maltrazz |
 pandora vanity 10/5/11 . chapter 5i AM HAPPY WHEN I READ THIS STORY TILL THE LAST CHAPTER.FINALLY SOME STORY ABOUT MY BELOVED OROCHIMARU IN A GOOD SIDE! FOR ME OROCHIMARU IS CUTE BUT WHEN I SAW THE LAST UPDATE DATE.MY HOPE SHATTERED. YOUR KIDDING ME! THE LAST UPDATE IS ON 2007! |
 Frootloopasaur 9/21/11 . chapter 5I was really interested by the summary of the story but reading this was a huge disappointment. It wasn't that well written and was more fir a younger age audience reading than what I thought. I can't really believe this got 500 reviews. It's not really that good or captivating. |
 Wolf Dragon Demon 9/13/11 . chapter 5Really good fic and hope that you decide to continue it. |
 Lady Arachne 9/4/11 . chapter 5i like this story i hope naruto joins orochimaru and kimimaru will still be alive so he could be a big brother to naruto maybe kabuto can be an uncle *snickers* |
 Neliel Tu Oderschvank Espada 3 6/29/11 . chapter 5more please this is really good and i want to see what will happen next and that i want to know if naruto will except orochumaru after he finds out that he is his dad |
 Aiseki0Hikari 3/16/11 . chapter 5Omfg! I love dis fic! I say Anko deserve to die in dis fic! I mean WTF? You'll just kill a guy bc of his father! Hello.. They might be the same blood but there have 'different' personality! God! Reading dis piss me off bc of those bitches who hurt Naru-chan! Damn I'm really piss!
Anyways.. I love Oro-chan in dis fic! I think it's kawaii.. How little kimimaru help baby Naruto.. / .. hehehe soo kawaii xD Father-son Oro&Naru .. Think thtz cute (and screw u if u hate it!)
Update soon! I can't wait to see Konoha along with the pplz&ninjas tht hurt and didn't help Naruto to ashes! Hahaha Sluaghter them pls! Lolz ..ja :D |