Boy... I know just how Al feels in this one... Thats how my family is. Well all but my dad. Sense no one listens I just fake everything and just take up space! Peace. ^-^;

Aizo

Interesting start to a story. I'll watch this.

It is very good, and very deep! It's like it speaks out to me! I love it, you are quite the talented writer, and a poet too! Well I hope you do well with this story and many others!

Wow. Short but sweet (Kind of the equivalent of Ed without the temper!). I liked how things were expressed from Al's point of view. He's always the character everyone will feel sorry for, but no one will think about what he thinks. Nice job

Aww, poor Al/you! You for the bad day comment, and Al for feeling so abused. I wanna hug the tin can. And send you an e-hug. Good voice though, I like how it does show that people aren;t really willing to listen, to advice or anyone else's problems. And Al is so sweet, I'd be his emotional pin-cushion any day!

Though short, the language and the arrangement of the words was something that I found complex, beautiful! ^_^ This seriously is going into my favourites.

Aww poor Al.
T.T
His life is pretty sad.
It was a pretty short one shot but I liked it!
^_^