You have to start writing again! This story is too good to leave. Update!

OMG... you have to seriously finish this story and keep updating it. I just watched the whole Season 12 of the Bachelor on youtube, the one with the Matt Grant, the English guy and i was so excited that this story was up. It was really romantic and i think that you could incorporate some scenes and ideas from the show. Matt and Shayne are great and are a great couple. Maybe if you have some of those ideas for naley, that would be fabulous. Please come back and update. I can't wait!

should consider finishing this

LOVE IT UPDATE PLEASSEE!

AWESOME!

pretty pretty please update soon! I wanna know what happens! I mean, I kinda know that he picks Haley [come on, it's NALEY for gods sake!], but I still wanna know how it folds out!

please update!

ive only just read this and fell in love with the story straight away but im crushed that u havent updated in ages i hope you have just forgotten about the story because its really great and i really want to know what happens next. this story is so good and has a great story line. you seem like a really great writer so could you plz update! great story again lol and plz update XMWAHX

hi yay u finally updated..aww no naley? ah well..haha liked the nathan & lucas..funny..hehe

Thank you soo much for updating. It's nice to read a conversation between the brothers. It shows their love and respect towards each other. Please update soon. I can't wait to see what happens next!

great chapter.. please update soon :)

Great chapter i cant wait to read more please update soon

yay, an update, i was just reading this story yesterday. I am really glad you updated today. I can't wait for more, so far this story has been really great, ud again soon

i love this story! please update soon!

That was a nice interulde in the story. The Nathan/Lucas relationship is great. Nathan gave Haley his rose! Aw! Hoping there's more taking place in the next chapter...

oh I am so glad that this story was finally updated I was really waiting for it. I really like how nathan is so drawn to haley but not alot more then that other girls. It makes it more realistic. Please ud soon I can't wait to see waht haley is thinking.