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Sailor Star Dust 1
2006-10-28
ch 1,
abuseGotta love it when Shinji snaps and starts screaming...
So...um. You...killed Asuka off in this fic?
Either way, nice job with how it was written, very angsty! ^_^
I heart EoE; it's one of my favorite movies!
Xenophen
2006-03-22
ch 1,
abuseShinji didn't kill Asuka - but you said her eyes were lifeless.

Other than that, I enjoyed this interpretation of Shinji's mind set.
YaoiYaoiYeah
2006-03-13
ch 1,
abuseDepressive and great! ^^ I like this a lot.
I'm so jealous of Rebbi, I wish I know Japanese.
I tried to learn but not very good.
=(
Great fic!
Goon Du the Newbie
2006-02-26
ch 1,
abusehm, that is a good one. Good reading, good fun. :)

In terms of characterisation, you kept Shinji in check, which is good. You explained Shinji's doubt and dissapointment in Third Impact. You also show Shinji dependent tendecy towards people. Good one.

Just a little nitpick before I signed off, I think that Shinji would never see his father as a strong person. methink that Shinji see his father as a man that is cold and direct. Watch ep25 and 26 of the tv series, Gendo played very little role in Shinji's instrumentality. Then again, this is my interpretation. NGE is all about perspective, and that made it a good series afterall.

Overall, good stuff. I looked foward to more works from you!
loaned
2006-02-26
ch 1,
abuseGood story, keep up the good work!
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