That was really good. You are an excellent writer. I really enjoyed reading your story. Hope to see more soon.

I wished you would have done more, this fic was looking to be really well done.

Sweet and lovely yes

For those who took the time to review the story, thanks for the vote of confidence, guys. I wasn't sure if the direction I was taking Nara would go over well with readers. Anyways, I've hit a writer's road block with my other story, so maybe I'll head back here and finish this fic up. So many ideas, so little time...!

One word...WOW

This is terrific.

I am so glad someone is FINALLY writting something about my favorite character, Nara.

You are doing a great job with her personality, I cannot wait to read more.

Keep up teh good work and if you need any help, feel free to e-mail me.

To frostyblossom: chapter 2 is on hold at the moment, I'm working on another project. But yeah, I agree...exo-fiction is hard to find. For those who are interested but never heard of exosquad, check out http:/www.stwing.upenn.edu/pdanner/resolute2.shtml for everything exosquad. Also, there are a lot of exofics at http:/members.tripod.com/efsnormandy/index.html

At last...more Exosquad fanfiction. I guess I should really try to finish the uncompleted stories I have. Anyway, that was good. I can't wait for you to finish this fic up. Got any future plans for this one?

I can't wait for your chapter 2! Ausome job! Blows away the few other fanfics at this site! And there are so few anywhere anymore! Its nice to find someone else who has even heard of the TV show! Keep up the good work! :)

tried reading it again, but no luck. Exo-Squad...ZZZZZZZ...

Didn't read it because Exo-Squad bores me too much. But I bet it's good.*snicker*