*sigh* Aw, happyhappyhappy! Adorable and wonderful, excellent composition and plot too. Really Super. Props!

Did you get the first scene from rent? it was cute. Now I wanna know how Mal feels about it (but I do have an idea already). Also about that story that she told Wash and not Mal I find that hard to believe. I mean she's know Mal for year and through hard times. I find it hard to believe that she'd tell Wash something she never told Mal so early in the relationship. -shrugs- Still a good read though. Keep it up, you can only get better.

I liked the phrase "shiny" that
Wash used. It was perfect Wash. Quite believable as well.