This is soo a good Story.incredibal.My compliments.And the Sequel is still better.

Oh wow. I think this is so far my favorite story ever! The Last Wish by Sapkowski is my other favorite. Wonderful characters and story development. Had me guessing in the end. How sad Warrior died. But so awesome that Lynex and Althea survived. Thank you for writing this awesome story.

I enjoyed this story a lot.

I always like to hear the story from a different perspective than the "good guys."

^^ I already faved your second part but never got around to this one. Again I wanted to say this was an awesome fanfic and thank you for writing it.

Aw, chit. I loved this, seriously. I cried when Warrior died, and I hardly ever cry for fanfiction. Great job!

I love this story! Keep writing more stories!

I agree, this is so, so well done. I got tears in my eyes when Warrior died. Where did you get the idea for this?

Wow. This is by far the best Stargate: Atlantis fanfiction that I have every read. I almost cried when Warrior died and I really liked how you showed Little Dagger's conflict when meeting the Lateans. You added an amazing culture to the Wraith. In your story, they were family with culture and hopes and desires; I will never view the Wraith the same way. This is just amazing work. I'm definitely reading the sequel!

damn, that is the best wraith fic out there! I swear! I cried when warrior died. aww so sad!

aww now im gonna cry..:(

but i love it and im gonna read thunder next which i have read once...PLEASE UPDATE IT! :D

still gonna cry though..

I so love this story!OMG this is the best story I ever read on Stargate Atlantis!Pls pls pls continue with Thunder, I'm so curious to find out what they're going to do to get their hive back... and I'm wondering why Lynex is acting so strange towards Little Dagger. I so love this story and also Thunder! You're the best Stargate Atlantis Fanfic writer ever! (btw I'm really a wraith fan, I don't see them as vicious creatures that bother the atlantis team or something, I really find them extremely fascinating, even more after reading this :) )
greetz: Wraith Fan -x-

Nice! Your story is absolutely wonderful! You wove a beautiful tale! Though I was saddened at Warrior's death at the end. I don't imagine there where many who where not saddened. Heh. *nods* Certianly one of my favorite stories I have read.

Hey buddy! I finally got a chance to read it! I figured it was a nice break from the grueling process I'm going through right now... never decide to change from third to first person in a novel AFTER you finish it... Ugh... anyway, I LOVED the first chapter! I'm not one for the Wraith, but a very interesting concept so far... Is there a bit of Sheppard in your fic? Please? Pretty please?
*~Artemay~*

I was a bit sad when Warrior was killed as I really liked this character and how he watched over his ward. The one thing I am not sad about is the bully getting what he deserved finally. Keep up the good work as this was a great story.

Hi there, I love your story Warrior. Its insight on the Wraith culture is amazing. I'm not quiet done with it but i will enjoy finishing it. There's just one thing, and I only noticed this because I am physicist like Sam. The Hive ships can't have glass windows because the ship would impode in the vacuum of space. They can however have force sheild windows.