 Psycho Tangerine 8/13/11 . chapter 1I liked this. |
 Ghostwriter 11/1/10 . chapter 1Great job. Love it. Catch ya on the flip side. |
 Elisa Nataly 3/30/07 . chapter 1Lol. That was cute, I love brotherly love. ha,ha, and that ending was great.
Good job. , |
 Sreym 3/13/07 . chapter 1I love this :D Never seen this missing scene before, and you have the brothers' chemistry down really well. |
 CrimsonEmperess 7/25/06 . chapter 1It was cute. Pity he used her though |
 jonoave 7/24/06 . chapter 1I really like reading your fic, Hieiko. Your take on between scences of NS involving Blake and Hunter is really cool and believable. Write more! |
 JuseaPeterson 6/20/06 . chapter 1This is good. I love how you show Blake and Hunter's relationship. Also how you show how he can get irritated with the Tori think but how worried he is. I love how it shows Hunter not wanting Blake to get hurt because he knows that Blake likes her. I'm a sucker for this family type things and I think you did a way awesome job. |
 the real vampire 3/30/06 . chapter 1Aw wow great story. I can so see it happening like that! |
 the BT 3/3/06 . chapter 1Oh yeah! Loved this one! |
 tptigger 2/27/06 . chapter 1 tptigger at mail dot com (spam bad!)
I'd have thought that all the missing scenes from Ninja Storm were long written, but somehow no one's gotten around to this one before. This fits seamlessly into the episode, though I'm not so sure Hunter would tug Blake's ear. Smack him upside the head, sure...
His worry, however, is perfect, and certainly fits with Hunter's body language from the episode. Great job! |