The End! (). . .or is it. . .

How come the Suliban could find her when she was with Trip but not on the planet

and with only one shot. that's pretty good for a kid.

That dream made Trip's job a whole lot eaiser

you said that this story would go way over my head, and it dosen't so there!(sticks out toung.)

It's hard to review every chapter if there nothing bad to say!

why were the Sulibun attacking her?

Yay, nice start. your are seriously geting better.

Please do a sequel to this story! I want to know if Jorna was able to get the Enterprise for first duty station.

I enjoyed the beginning of this story. Please keep updating it!