Gaah...if you leave it up to my dirty thinking...tsk. not a gd idea. Anyway, I loved it , even with the abrupt ending. HoroRen :)) great pairing... >.

Oh wow, this was great, I have to say my favourite line was the one at the end: “My reason for living…” through violet hair, tearful golden eyes locked with black. “…is you, Horokeu.”
That was really nice, I also loved Ren's mood swing, yup...

this was very good and moving please please please make another one lv ya always amy xx

PLZ PLZ PLZ YOU HAVE 2 WRITE A SEQUAL! I LOVED IT SO MUCH!

AW!
IT'S BEAUTIFUL! TvT
I loved it!! :)

srry if i seem like im being weird here but can i ask what schools you've been to?

from,
taryn

ps-nice story XP

Heh, I loved it! If you find time, don't hesitate to write an "after effect" of this!

ShamaLover

This story is great! ^_^

That was so cool. Well don't dude; to say it was a oneshot it was really good. Don't worry. Horo didn't sound like a **, and you got everyone's characters at the begining perfect, especially Ryu and Yoh.
Love (Your Nee-san) Sakura

I liked the way you ended it, it leaves it open for a sequel should you choose to write one (And, I hope you do)!

i like how u ended this. kinda new/modern if you ask me. and i dont think Horo was too much of an idiot, i think you had him in character really well. nice job, i really like this

I think Ren's outburst was the greatest thing in this story. I liked it, but I would've wanted to know what made Horo felt so uneasy at the beggining of the story. Probably I'm a total loser and I didn't get it, but ... I think I'd better shut up.

It was a good one shot, congrats.

Very good!
Another well done fic!
The emotions were spot on and the characters stayed perfectly in character!
Excellent fic! I really enjoyed reading it!
I look forward to more!
Keep up the great work!