its a shame this was never finished - there are good 'bones' of a story here. I like your writing style too.

wow - I am reading old fic and just finished the first chapter - you are brave to include an abortion in your story. A legal medical procedure, I am passing no judgements either way and you've aged the characters, it is just a brave thing for an author to do. Well written, good first chapter.

LJ

i think you should do more its getting interesting

please please make more captures and finnish the story! its awsem, u have an amazeing imagination u could be a story writer when ur older hahaha!...GREAT STORY!

whats taking so long, im begging here UPDATE this story it is AWESOME

that was really good

i read this stroy and fell in love with it update soon and keep updating it this is a really really really good story

omgosh
it took you al long time to update

well now update some more
SON

gotta love it ;)

Don't give up on this story! It's an excellent story! It has the potential to be uberly cliche, but it's not, and the characters are very nicely kept in character!
~Aeron

hey! well...i'm totally happy that u updated! i really like ur story n wanna see what'll happen later on. i know what u mean...i kinda lost interest in teen titans too...since they stopped making the shows...but i still like reading the fanfics. they put a little twist in things...don't u think? plz update...n i can't wait 2 see what happens next!

vi! i read between the lines! when Richi said that Kori needs to replace the dandelion, he means that she needs to replace roy with him.

I love your story!!

it has a great plotline and I really love how you're staying pretty true to the characters personality!

and the thing about the dandelion was that she might need to find a new love

keep up the good work!!

:)

-titandancer21

awesome

I'm going back to school in two days! Not fair...

Please update soon!

XX

write more write more! me and my friend NEED to know what is going to HAPPEN NEXT!

you have a very interesting story and have good writing skills too!