delicious :)

I'm not much of a seme!Al fan, but I really liked this! :D

m nice *drools a bit on the table* keep up the good work ( and seme Al too XD i love seme Al )

Cute _ Great work for your first lemon! Thanks for posting.

_ Aw, I LOVE ELRICEST. Yeah, I've been on an Elriceset fic spree and I was lucky enough to come across your ficcy! It's very well done; just a few spelling errors, nothin' too major but in any case, it's wonderful!

Nice and kinky.

I just have to say one thing - I've noticed that you have repeatedly used the word "menstruations" in this piece. However, I believe the word you were looking to use was "ministrations" since "menstruation" is a term used to describe a woman's period...I'm surprised no one's picked up on that yet. Either way, the story itself wasn't bad.

elricest is so great! this is one of the few that i could really call good *huggles* please please please please make another one? (whoa a lesbian that gets turned on by yaoi. thats screwed up)

wow...that's all I have to say...wow

okay its super scary but its okay i liked it even though i almost barphed i had to tell myself plenty of times in my mind it would NEVER happen cause ed has a girlfriend me!

XD

Yay! Lemon is my new favorite fruit. And that was one good lemon, right there. I heart you. Yay!

I feel pretty, oh so pretty! (I'm a little OOC, okay? lol.)

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Hello! I have one thing to say to your EdXAl lemon...IT WAS SO HOT! *drooling* You have to write another one! Pretty, pretty, PRETTY PLEASE? *gives many cookies* Congrats on your first lemon btw! _ Keep up the good work!

Raeven's Mistress

o.o Lovely.

i liked it. very cute. very arousing (lol)

Very nice...