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| Autumnights 2008-03-16 ch 17, | abuseWhat can I say? Well done. I'm not quiet sure where the climax was but the chase to save Kurama was vrey interesting. I stayed up till 3:20 am here, and I have church in the morning. Oh well, I enjoyed it. Perhaps later i will search out the sequel, but sleep just seems like a really good idea right now. I still cant decide if I was suprised or not when the mastermind was Karasu. He just seems like a very difficult character for authors to leave dead. But, it made for a good story. I'll check more of your stories later, so you'll probably hear from me shortly. Bravo. |
| Corky 2007-02-07 ch 1, anon. | abusewow good start ^__^ i really like it. i really enjoyed the way you layered Kurama's fall. that was stupendously done. i can't wait to read more. Kudos! |
| Ice Puppet 2006-06-19 ch 17, | abuseYou know... I was bored and mass-looking for good HxK fanfiction... and I was finding NOTHING. Just as I was about to give up guess what I stumbled upon... this! And so now I have stayed up until 4 (started around 2:30) reading your fanfiction! And let me say... it was worth it! I loved it! Good job. :D |
| Destiny Lot 2006-04-09 ch 11, | abuseI'm really enjoying this story but for some reason I can see pass this chapter...? Something about an outdated url. Anyway I hope this is fix soon cause I can't wait to read what happens next. Ja ne |
| Nyte Kit 2006-04-08 ch 17, | abuseThis story was really good. It had a wonderful plot, great vivid imagery, and was very nicely written. You did a great job sticking to the characters actual canon attitudes and actions, too. Great job with that! Pretty much everything you had happen in here had the perfect reactions for each character. Oh, I loved Karasu's inclusion in this. How he got Kuro and then took over a little girl's body were great. It was even better that the girl then turned crazy! Too funny!! Also, I really enjoyed the ending. I don't think any other ending would have worked. Kuro dead, Karasu free, and Kurama and Hiei still together and the fox saving that woman. (That's what I think was in the box; her antidote.) It was just perfect, really. You did an awesome job on this!! |
| laughing serpent 2006-04-04 ch 3, | abuseIntruiging. And finsihed already? I hope that bodes well. |
| WhiteWolfCub 2006-04-03 ch 17, | abuseGreat story! Can't wait to see a sequel! If there is one of course! ^.^ |
| bluekitsune251 2006-04-02 ch 17, | abusewhoo-hoo! congratulations! i really liked it a lot! keep writing, don't stop, 'k? |
| kahuffstix 2006-03-31 ch 17, | abusei think that medicain was in the box. i really liked this story. i am sad it is over. i can not wait for the sequel. bye for now. |
| berbec 2006-03-31 ch 17, | abuseLook forward to more, this was a good story. |
| Kuronoko Tsubame 2006-03-30 ch 17, | abuseTerrific ending. The story was great. I look forward to the sequel, which will no doubt be very good as well. Congrats on finishing! And I fear for Kyoto's sake... Kuronoko |
| Annoying Little Twit 2006-03-30 ch 17, anon. | abuseIts the end... Its the end... *cry* |
| Annoying Little Twit 2006-03-29 ch 16, | abuseOh my, what a strange... eternal question. Poor Kuronue, but he was dead and decaying anyways, maybe death was better... The epilouge is next? Oh the horror, another good fiction ending before my eyes... *sob* |
| KyoHana 2006-03-28 ch 16, | abuseThis has been a wonderful story, as was this chapter. I'll be sorry to see it end, but I will eagerly await more of your writing. |
| comicfancat 2006-03-28 ch 16, anon. | abuseVery good story,well written to keep you on the edge of your seat.Chapter 16 was a surprise though in having Hiei own Kurama and no one say anything about it(like Yusuke or the godling)What a great chance for sequels or one-shots.Can't wait for chapter 17 to be updated,hope its soon. Nice job |