woaz. thats really good! when i clicked on it i was all 'sigh. i hope it's good', and it was. thank you!

this was really great. i love your writing :)

You, are a fantastic writer. I loved this fanfic!

How did you think of it?Its so neat!!

wow, loved it. was a great idea for what happened after the book!

what a swweet story. The more i'm reading all these fics about Lyra and Will, The more i'm remembering from the books. Anyway. I like it.

hey you!
fist of all i want to say you, that i really loved reading your story.i´ve ask myself many times, what had happend to lyra and will and i really like your version.
you describe ther feelings very good and you can understand what they must feel and their desperation. you made that very good.
ayara

ps: i hope my english is at least not to wrong (i´m from germany)

this was a really really great story. i loved the way u described that "tug at the heart" thing.

Hey, I've already talked to you about it, but I thought I'd point out that *does a little happy dance* you put my name down at the bottom! Yay! I feel so special, even though I was a complete retard today at school, you know, the snack machine incident. He he he...
Love ya!

wow i really like this story! its really good! you described their pain and love for each other really well, and its so sad! great job!
-kt