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ThrogmortenMimic
2008-05-26 . chapter 11
Why did you stop writing this!? Continue please hehe
Mayab
2007-12-03 . chapter 11
Yay! Love this story- Sorceress Mist turned me into a SophiaLuther fan. Now I want to read Alphia...

Albel would make a could big brother. Way overprotective but still adorable.
InnerFire
2007-07-21 . chapter 11
cool new attacks. Good thing he can't use Insanity Prelude. That one was creepy.

Nice way to introduce all the characters to him at once. That was amusing. Why not make it a party lol

Don't have too much to say, good chapter, update soon!
Mad Writter
2007-07-08 . chapter 11
Hi, I've been following this story for sometime already. It's really great since there's not many Sophia&Luther story.

By the way, I'm a big fan of Alphia. It's nice seeing a slight of that here^^. I really like the way Albel and Luther bumped their heads.
Shizuka Usagi
2007-07-05 . chapter 11
Can't wait to see what happens next. I liked how Sophia stuck up for herself. It's funny to see Luther in denial. Makes him seem like a hormonal teen. I wonder how he's going to keep his cool in front of the others. If three's a crowd, what's ten?
Illusion Sky
2007-07-04 . chapter 11
Aha! Loser! You should update more. I wanna see what happens...
Millenium Ring
2007-07-04 . chapter 11
Heya! Great chapter! I like that you've got Luther in a really awkward situation. I'm really curious as to how he'll survive and NOT go insane :)

And Albel looking out for Sophia is actually fairly believable. I liked that in this chapter too :)

You gave Sophia a slight backbone when you made her decline to Fayt and the others offer in this chapter. Yayness to you! She needs to stand up and say no sometimes :)

I can't wait for the next chapter :)

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mistress-reebi
2007-07-03 . chapter 1
I didn't catch the Ameena reference, but that does explain why she looks like her and was ill. (I though she was anaemic until Mirage said something about her lungs. Or maybe Fayt missed her so much that he thought she looked like her when she didn't.) I'm not a Luther/Sophia fan (I honestly don't like him) but I like reading stories that aren't my favourite pairing. Poor Sophia, but she was in character. I thought it was neat that the Sphere cosplayed and creative. I'll be reading more, so you two better write more.
Millenium Ring
2007-05-02 . chapter 10
His plan is so going to backfire, isn't it? hehe...

And gosh does he over-analyse everything or what? He's like a super computer :)

Good chapter! Looking forward to reading more! :D

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InnerFire
2007-04-14 . chapter 10
Very…interesting. The whole thing with Blair and the wrist band was pretty cool, even if you did recycle it lol. And the added powers of the connection gene don’t seem overdone, seeing as she can’t use them at will. Good job with those.

But, that drove me nuts so much at the end! It seemed like Luther was becoming just a /bit/ less heartless, and now he’s all like, ‘oh, hey, as soon as that wench isn’t useful anymore, its time to get rid of her!’ It seemed like he was getting a little better in earlier chapters (like 7&8), but now it’s like he hasn’t changed at all! I guess he’s pretty mad to be banished, but still!
Illusion Sky
2007-04-13 . chapter 10
Oh, I was kinda hoping Luther WOULD kill Sophia. Just kiddin'.
Illusion Sky
2007-03-04 . chapter 9
Oh, mysteries...
Millenium Ring
2007-02-24 . chapter 9
Woah! This is excellent! I'v been reading a heck of a lot of stories with Sophia in as the main heroine, and this is definitely one of the good-uns! I never thought i'd enjoy a story where Luther returns, but i am...so now i think i may be kinda hooked! So please continue this when you get the chance, since hey, i love it!
aFigureOfSpeech
2007-02-14 . chapter 9
Ohh, I deffinately find it interesting to see what's going on inside Luther's head. I always wonder just what those guys are thinking, the ones that aren't so particularly inclined to show it through actions and words. Plus they always seem to have some odd thought-processes. XP But yeah, deffinately interesting. I really want to find out your entire take on the Connection Gene. Hm...
InnerFire
2007-02-12 . chapter 8
Yay update!

I want to comment on this, but I'll just wait for the explanation first.
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