   critically critical critic 2007-11-02 . chapter 3Oh dolly, update for Christ's sake. I'm going out of my mind here.
Critic |
 Ricer 2007-05-06 . chapter 3 i like it but you have to keep reviewing, otherwise it gets so boring! It's a good plot, but it just started, it can still turn bas. |
 Freyja Vanadis 2006-12-29 . chapter 3Woho! You did it! Gah, anyway, I gave you my name suggestions and then didn't review for ages, I feel so horrible...But this is so great. You have no idea how much I want to take these Mary Sues and run them through the garbage disposal! But that's your goal, right! Haha! You really brightened my day, ya know? For a moment I forgot how bad my tonsils hurt. Well enough of my rambling. This is excellent and I'll be back! |
| lyssa-kissa 2006-12-01 . chapter 3 o this is interesting. update soon!! |
| Fireless Fly 2006-12-01 . chapter 1 I liked it. Can you review my fic Harry Potter and The End? |
 xXxFluffy-Pink-Socks 2006-12-01 . chapter 3It's strange... I was just thinking of Mary-Sues when I stumbled across your story. Anyway, this story is well-written and has a good and funny plot. Keep up the good work. |
 Varietygirl9143 2006-12-01 . chapter 3lol. i like it! |
| Red-Devil15 2006-12-01 . chapter 3 haha! i loves it! do more soon please! it's so funny! |
| Freyja Vanadis 2006-11-15 . chapter 2 Wow, too good...too funny! I'm loving this. It's so true to the dreaded Mary Sue. Names, you say? Etymology's a hobby of mine...beautiful names. I guess I could throw you a few. How about Patience? (I guess that's a beautiful quality considering almost no one has any!) I worked with a girl named Love once... Anything coming from a flower might be beautiful...Rose would be a good one. You could just be blatant and use the name Beauty. Ugh...My brain's mush. But there's enough to give you the beginnings of a nice little clique.
Now I've just noticed how long it's been since you've updated...wow. Well, anyway, if you ever want to finish, then here you go! I personally think it's funny and worth keeping up if you have the time. |
| critically critical critic 2006-07-24 . chapter 2 Tsk, tsk. You signed eveything Naito and so I signed my last review as such. I need sleep. First I am off to read some more of the works by our mutual friend, Jia. Night love.
Critic, not Naito, Critic. |
| critically critical critic 2006-07-24 . chapter 1 Lovely, honestly I think this is lovely. Had to check under my bed for MarySues before I went to sleep. Keep it up Hon.
Naito. |
 E.V.A.Graebel 2006-02-26 . chapter 1I don't usually read HP-fic but this was awesome! Partly because there is a little bit of MarySue in all of us, no matter how we try to fight it.
Keep going! This was great! |
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