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| Kindra Mckleen 2008-04-09 ch 1, | abuseThis was a really good story. I don't have much more to say than that. |
| Chips Dip 2006-12-12 ch 12, | abusepoor little prince. but I think he's not trying hard enough. -Miya |
| Chips Dip 2006-12-12 ch 11, | abusehello dear forestwater. ^^ I don't know if you've forgotten about me or not, but sorry for not r&ring in forever. I just got lazy and your chapters are all so freaking long. ^^;; I saw you got the sequal out for this. ^^ and this was an...intersting chapter. I'll continue reading though it might take me aawhile. ^^;; -Miya oh and if your still interested, I updated The Princess Assassin and there is a new story up. ^^ |
| scifigirl77 2006-11-22 ch 23, | abuseyay for sequels! can't wait for that one! i LOVE this story! |
| scifigirl77 2006-11-22 ch 22, | abuseSTUPID EVIL DARK TRIFORCE! I HATE IT!! I LOVE DEMI! Ok now to read the end. |
| scifigirl77 2006-11-22 ch 21, | abuseA ballpoint pen? That's weird. anyway this is not good for Demi. And you were talking about me weren't you? The part where random people fall in love with the idiots? Yeah I thought so. |
| scifigirl77 2006-11-21 ch 20, | abuseReviewing you (don't beat me to death). Yay for Demi and Daphnes! I love them both. Ok I want to predict something. Nabooru will die and Ganandorf will go nuts!aM I right? |
| myshadowspirit 2006-11-21 ch 23, | abuseThe end! OMG!! My CD just ended too. Tia didn't die! Yay! She was another one I thought was suppose to die. . .well. In order to make this review longer I will repeat the word "Bla" blablablablablablablablablablablablablablabalblablabalbalblablablablabalbabalbablabaqlba . . .opps I got a q in there. And it wasn't from Jacob! |
| myshadowspirit 2006-11-21 ch 22, | abuseWhen Demi was going to blow off Jade I thought I was going to be like, what the hell is wrong with Demi, but it was all sad instead. I like you put Daren there. It made me feel better, and it was an unexpexted plesant surprize in a inevitbly doom. I kept thinking Impa was going to die . . . then I remembered she cant. PHEW! We should do have a pary for you. I'll make something. |
| myshadowspirit 2006-11-21 ch 21, | abuseOMG TRENT! HE'S BACK! and . . .his tail fin is . . .yellow. . .still. I laughed when the goran tossed Demi in to the water again. I just pitchured him doing it like throeing away a peice of garbage even though he was being kind. (Chuckles) Nabby loves Gan-Gan! |
| myshadowspirit 2006-11-20 ch 20, | abuseI thinl Daphnes charater is different then Demi's. There are so many things that Demi would do that Daphnes wouldn't dream of. . . and I'm sorry to say this but I think Daphnes is smarter then Dimi. I like the pirats. I'll be sad when they go. Hostilites . . .hahaha. . . funny |
| myshadowspirit 2006-11-14 ch 19, | abuseI'm reveiwing! I liked this chapter to. and Demi . . . Demi made me laugh. And Daphnes always makes me laugh and now that they were put in one I laughed dubbley . . .or something. What happens to the Sheikah? Impa was about to say something important but I think you have a time laps after this, right? Do we ever find out what she was going to say? |
| myshadowspirit 2006-11-13 ch 18, | abuseYay! Cause I'm awsoume like that. I like the part when Ganondorf is with Nabooru the best. It's all . . . romancey. (^^) OH and this sentence made me laugh "He refused to turn her way as she chattered about trivial things like war and devastation. " Cause war and devastation is 'trival' KC: It's not that funny. ME: Yes it it! |
| myshadowspirit 2006-11-12 ch 17, | abuseI loved this chapter! It made me laugh like 5 times. Daphnes is funny when he's sleep deprived. I like reading about Daphnes and Zelda. . .I don't remember what happens to them after this. . .It seems like you wrote this forever ago but not really. |
| myshadowspirit 2006-11-12 ch 16, | abuseOh yeah . . . I remember that . . . I wonder what's wrong with my computer. . . Well it's needed so I keep it. It's so old it's adorable! . . .Anyway I like the pirates. they got funky accents |