You have presented me a very well-written story! Thank you for you work!

I'm truly moved by Fara's bravery and his love of peace, though reading about his torment has made me sad. Next time pray don't hurt him like that! A good steward should learn to protect himself from harm for his people and his king; and Fara's strengh lies more in intelligence and strategy, rather than fighting.

Anyway, I love this story.

I really loved your story! It was one of the best fanfictions I have ever read! Thank you!

Szepilona10

Very enjoyable well-plotted story. I put it on my favorites list, as you may be able to tell. Great characterizations, including the OC's. I plan to look to see what else you've written.

Fabulous! Please, a sequel!

Great story! Just loved it!

This was a Great! Story. The only changes I would make were a few more scenes with Faramir during his captivity, it seemed a little lacking and slightly forgotten in that area, but other than that it was SUPERB!

This is a beautiful beginning! You are truly a wordsmith and paint an incredible scene with clarity and precision.

Faramir is my favorite character and you already have him written in a warm, loving way.

I do hope this is not the last you shall write.

Hugs,

Ithilvalon

Beautiful!

I hope you've considered writing as a possible career-or side career! Your diction, style, and mastery of the art is breathtaking.

What a great, action-packed chapter this is. You kept it moving quite well. Alas, poor Faz is gonna get tortured, but I knew this from Chapter 1. Your Faramir is turning into a great action hereo. I was surprised to see Legolas injured as well as Faramir. I'm usually disinterested in "Armani Elf," but your portrayal of him in this battle situation piqued my interest.

Ack. Karil is such a nasty s.o.b., isn't he. He seems almost a 19th century type, who would kidnap Eowyn and tie her to the railroad tracks, if there had been railroad tracks in Gondor.

I'm enjoying this so far.

- Steff

Hi Sue -

Just wanted to let you know that I am finally catching up on "A Lasting Peace." And boy, does it live up to its promise. I certainly intend to follow it to its conclusion. (And thanks for being one of the few writers who does Movie Faramir. Hooray!)

Like Linda Hoyland and others have said, reading "A Lasting Peace' through the browser is a huge improvement over reading it at TORC. I'm glad you've brought your story over to a large readership.

- Steff

wow, this was a great story. I hope that you will start another one soon, or better yet, I hope that you will write a sequel.

What a great story! I'd have liked a little more of Faramir's trials and a little less of Eowyn's worry, but that's just me. As it is, what made it into the text was appropriate to the story. I'll have to go check out what else you've posted now!

It is good to see Faramir well on the way to recovery and know how well Aragorn has cared for you for a most enjoyable story.

Wonderful Epilogue! Wonderful story! But now its over and I must go cry. ): But before i do, I must say that this story really leaves you feeling good at the end! I like that!