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| Esther-Channah 2008-07-04 ch 40, | abuseI loved the interaction between Teela and Romily! |
| senivatar 2008-07-02 ch 39, anon. | abuseI had to confess that I was liking your fic, but after so many chp I think the plot became tiresome and endless (sp?), Now this new information about Skeletor´s plan in turning Adam in a woman, well, this don´t sound a good ideia to me. I would like to read more about Adam recovery and how Teela would help him, but in some normal ways, or, how they would capture and punish Daviona. Thanks for the ride. |
| Esther-Channah 2008-07-02 ch 39, | abuseMy heart goes out to Adam at the end! I also love what you're doing to make the OC's mesh so seamlessly with the canon characters. Well done! |
| Lord Kain 2008-06-29 ch 38, | abuseErr Gender Bending magic now? That be an odd way to introduce She-Ra into the story. Skeletor might be happier never learning Prince Adam and He-Man are one in the same now, because of how stupid he'd feel after his previous false assumptions. |
| Esther-Channah 2008-06-29 ch 38, | abuseYour plot has more twists than a pretzel! I love it! |
| Daouid 2008-06-29 ch 38, | abuseAnother update for a true epic. Your story should be illegal, it´s just too addicting^^. Keep up the great work. |
| Evelyn CMB 2008-06-28 ch 38, | abuseWow, that last comment by Evil-Lyn is just totally and completely twisted. ;-) Great work! |
| Esther-Channah 2008-06-27 ch 37, | abuseExcellent! Thank you for that pillow fight! It really worked! Bravo! |
| wildpartyhouse247 2008-06-24 ch 37, | abuseLove how you lightened the mood and how the Sorceress joined on. I had a giggle when Adam told his parent to kiss. |
| Evelyn CMB 2008-06-24 ch 37, | abuseOh, that lighthearted bit was so needed! I had a big stupid grin on my face all the way through. It's so good to see Adam finally coming out of the depression and getting past the suicidal impulses. Your description of his frustration with his own thoughts, as well as Durgan's assurances, was just great. And getting him out of the castle soon sounds like a recipe for more action! :-) Wonderful job! |
| xenokattz 2008-06-21 ch 36, | abuseI discovered this at 9 PM last night and stayed up until 3:30 in the morning to read it all. It's a very compelling story. I grew up wit the 80's cartoon so the modern language use was jarring at first but the characterisation and plot more than made up for it. What I like the most about it is that you've obviously done your research and/or have RL experience dealing with psychological trauma and drug addiction. Adam's withdrawal symptoms and PTSD are spot on as are his parents & doctor's reactions and treatments. How can I help but love the work of an author who cares enough to do research? ;) Also, Jeclarren is one of the best OCs I've ever read. He's just interesting enough not to fade into the background but he never takes over the spotlight from the true stars. In conclusion, kudos all around and I can't wait to see how the story resolves itself. |
| Chuck 2008-06-16 ch 36, anon. | abuseI've really liked what I've read so far. I know I say it to often, but keep up the good work. |
| winkaku 2008-06-06 ch 27, anon. | abuseThe ending of chapter 27: The reason I so love the way your mind works. This story is a bit like an abusive lover; long, drawn out in a way to prolong suffering and leaving one with a sense of "OH no she DIDN'T!" However the enticing allure of the story keeps you coming back for more again and again. I love it, now be a good enabler and keep writing! |
| jj 2008-06-02 ch 36, anon. | abuseI hope they find her soon before she gets Adam back |
| PriestessHelene 2008-05-30 ch 36, | abuseEach chapter is very intense with great emotion and feeling keep this up! It is awesome! |