When you come across a story like this one that is so far along it can be difficult to get everything that you think in a review that will do a story of this caliber justice. First and foremost is that this story is excellent. Well written with good character developement. I like what you have done with Orko. He was always one of my favorites and I always thought that if he could ever get used to Eternia's magical laws he would be a formidable opponent. (Grinning sidenote - Doesn't he remind you of the black mages from the Final Fantsy games?) I liked the new He-man series. It was a little grittier and darker. Not as childish. And there was a big difference in appearance between Adam and He-man so that it was easier for Adam to not be discovered. They never got around to it but I often wondered if they where going to bring Adora into the story at some point. They hinted at some tragedy that occured in the past, but never explained it. I look forward to you continueing this story and the one about Adam's attempt at suicide. Be well and keep up the good work.

update please

Not entirely sure what anyone else has been saying, but I think this is a pretty good read. Looks like you haven't updated in a while, so here's hoping that changes.

Update...oh update...were are you hiding...MARCO! MARCO! CRAP maybe this story doesn't know how to play Marco Polo...LOL...please update

You certainly weren't kidding when you said this would be an epic. I'm glad that you are not rushing Adam's recovery. It makes the story more real and emotional. I hope we will see more soon!

Wow, a really good read so far. I would say more but at the moment I've been up for a little longer than I'm used to. A really great story so far and I look forward to reading more.

Interesting so far. I never would have thought of Evil Lin and Dunkon as a couple. In all of the other stories, it is Dunkon and the Sorcerous who wind up a couple as in all of the stories, Dunkon and the Sorcerous are Teela's parents. I can't wait for what happens next.

niakbor-

Had a hunch you were leading to that coupling but, wow, was not ready for it.
Yoinks!
Man at Arms is getting jiggy with Evil Lyn...
How is the Sorceress gonna take this, or do you figure she had copulated with Duncan's brother, Fisto?
Keep up the writing.
It still captivates!

niakbor-

Glad you're back and writing more.
Kind of curious on what'll happen next and when they need He-Man.
Not looking forward to Skeletor's Change Adam's Gender plan though. Lil' skeezy, but still following til the end!
Keep it up!

Awesome story so far keep it up.

I'm really enjoying where you're going with this story, and I'm glad for all the updates. Keep up the good work.

I'm glad Marlena's checking on her soon-to-be Princess; they've emphasized Adam's recovery/state of mind above all, it's good someone's looking out for the bride too. Although I don't remember much about her from the cartoon(s), I really like how you've drawn Marlena.
This line was great too: "Having her in his arms felt so right, it was unbelievable." I wonder if the bond really can transfer strength between them...
Duncan seems a bit happier with Evil-Lyn here than in your other story!
I'm so glad you're continuing to update. :)

Glad to see your back updating this. Please update soon I can't wait for the wedding.

I must say, this is a remarkable story, im ecstatic to see its thriving so long

The Sanviro-Romily reunion was sweet. I almost would have liked to see the theater play. ;)
It's also good to see Teela being tutored by Marlena what it will mean to be a queen.