Update...oh update...were are you hiding...MARCO! MARCO! CRAP maybe this story doesn't know how to play Marco Polo...LOL...please update

You certainly weren't kidding when you said this would be an epic. I'm glad that you are not rushing Adam's recovery. It makes the story more real and emotional. I hope we will see more soon!

Wow, a really good read so far. I would say more but at the moment I've been up for a little longer than I'm used to. A really great story so far and I look forward to reading more.

Interesting so far. I never would have thought of Evil Lin and Dunkon as a couple. In all of the other stories, it is Dunkon and the Sorcerous who wind up a couple as in all of the stories, Dunkon and the Sorcerous are Teela's parents. I can't wait for what happens next.

niakbor-

Had a hunch you were leading to that coupling but, wow, was not ready for it.
Yoinks!
Man at Arms is getting jiggy with Evil Lyn...
How is the Sorceress gonna take this, or do you figure she had copulated with Duncan's brother, Fisto?
Keep up the writing.
It still captivates!

niakbor-

Glad you're back and writing more.
Kind of curious on what'll happen next and when they need He-Man.
Not looking forward to Skeletor's Change Adam's Gender plan though. Lil' skeezy, but still following til the end!
Keep it up!

Awesome story so far keep it up.

I'm really enjoying where you're going with this story, and I'm glad for all the updates. Keep up the good work.

I'm glad Marlena's checking on her soon-to-be Princess; they've emphasized Adam's recovery/state of mind above all, it's good someone's looking out for the bride too. Although I don't remember much about her from the cartoon(s), I really like how you've drawn Marlena.
This line was great too: "Having her in his arms felt so right, it was unbelievable." I wonder if the bond really can transfer strength between them...
Duncan seems a bit happier with Evil-Lyn here than in your other story!
I'm so glad you're continuing to update. :)

Glad to see your back updating this. Please update soon I can't wait for the wedding.

I must say, this is a remarkable story, im ecstatic to see its thriving so long

The Sanviro-Romily reunion was sweet. I almost would have liked to see the theater play. ;)
It's also good to see Teela being tutored by Marlena what it will mean to be a queen.

A suite with two bed rooms for the newly weds? well it certainly makes sense given their unusual situation. But it be a weird thing to explain to others who aren't in on the truth.
I guess the simplest cover story would be to tell courters and such.
'its in case they have one of those newlywed fights' which is fairly self-explanatory.

I'm really anxious for when we'll finally get to the wedding chapter.

I imagine the couple will feel rather awkward on the wedding night. They'd have the realization that they are married, what is normally expected to happen on ones wedding night.
But also the crushing weight of what happened to Adam and the state he's in, and that their relationship is rushed and new.

I'm enjoying the way you show the closeness between Marlena and Teela. Can't wait to see what's next!

Uh-oh... things aren't going to be good for whomever she decides to go for next... O.o Loved the bit with Teela and Marlena, by the way. Very well-written, and it really stuck with their characters. I feel sorry for Jeclarren, too. Poor boy... If he leaves the house, will her spell kill him? Or just incapacitate him? Either way would be bad...

Great chapter!